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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.30

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 30
According to the survey of the Indian Pollution Control Board, garbage production has surged by 20% than the previous projections and expected to increase in the upcoming years. The primary causative factors of this issue are Industrialization and overpopulation, which can be mitigated by unveiling strict rules and promoting recycling methods. To embark on, Industrialization is widespread to continents across the world, which is one of the prominent reasons for this issue. It is evident that tons of raw materials are being used by factories to make products, and myriads of wastages are dispensed to the landfills. For example, in Albania, a renowned paper making company, The Copier has produced more than 1 million tons of bio-wastages and polluted the environment, due to which the establishment was sentenced 20 million dollars as a penalty. Besides this, over-population also significantly contributes to this issue. It is undeniable that garbage production is directly associated with the people's population. So a great deal of population demands higher production; consequently, it leads to increase in wastage production. However, the regime can take remedial actions to counter this problem before it aggravates further. The authorities should phase out this practice from the people by implementing rigorous rules against waste production. To illustrate, Japan has a law against rubbish production, under which people should pay a hefty penalty if they do not abide by the restrictions. In addition, awareness should be created to follow recycle methods. In many countries, people are advised to use separate baskets to dispense different types of wastes. Hence, it should be globally followed. In conclusion, this essay discussed the causes of this issue and suggested several viable remedies. I believe, in the future, people will be waking up to this issue to save the environment.
According to the survey of the Indian Pollution Control Board, garbage
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production
has surged by 20% than the previous projections and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
to increase in the upcoming years. The primary causative factors of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
issue
are Industrialization and overpopulation, which can
be mitigated
by unveiling strict
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
and promoting recycling methods.

To embark on, Industrialization is widespread to continents across the world, which is one of the prominent reasons for this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
issue
. It is evident that tons of raw materials are being
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
by factories to
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make
products, and myriads of
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wastages
are dispensed
to the landfills.
For example
, in Albania, a renowned paper making
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company
, The Copier has produced more than 1 million tons of
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bio-wastages
and polluted the environment, due to which the establishment
was sentenced
20 million dollars as a penalty.
Besides
this, over-population
also
significantly
contributes to this
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issue
. It is undeniable that garbage
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production
is
directly
associated with the
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people
's population.
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So
a great deal of population demands higher
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production
;
consequently
, it leads to increase in wastage production.

However
, the regime can take remedial actions to counter this problem
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before
it aggravates
further
. The authorities should phase out this practice from the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
by implementing rigorous
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
against waste
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
production
. To illustrate, Japan has a law against rubbish
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
production
, under which
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
should pay a hefty penalty if they do not abide by the restrictions.
In addition
, awareness should
be created
to follow recycle methods. In
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
countries,
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people
are advised
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
separate baskets to dispense
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different
types of wastes.
Hence
, it should be globally followed.

In conclusion
, this essay discussed the causes of this
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issue
and suggested several viable remedies. I believe, in the future,
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people
will be waking up to this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
issue
to save the environment.
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8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 30

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
294 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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