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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v.26

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 26
In recent times the rubbish produced by any country has reached to an alarming level. In this essay, I shall discuss the reasons for this, and recommend the possible ways that a government can help. One of the main reasons in the increment of rubbish is because the products are being used once or not getting recycled. For example, plastic bags used in grocery shopping are used once and thrown away in the waste. As a result it increases the rubbish and finally gets dumped into the sea, damaging the sea life habitat. Moreover, one of the recent statistics showed that paper waste produced the most amount of rubbish last year. Offices, industries and schools are using unnecessarily a lot of paper than ever before. Consequently, the increase demand in paper industry has called for extreme deforestation, in result destroying the natural environment. On the other hand, government can take steps to decrease the rubbish produced every year. One of the steps could be to introduce strict laws to recycle waste in a sustainable way. For instance, waste paper can be recycled to make packaging material for industries, significantly reducing the rubbish produced overall. Another way could be to forbid the usage of plastic bags in shopping places. This could be replaced by carrying bags made up of rubbish products, and furthermore be charged for it. In conclusion, one of the major reasons for increased rubbish is due to non-recycling of products. This could be resolved by implementing new rules and regulations by the government. Nevertheless, the combine effort from the individuals and the government can lead us to a clean environment.
In recent times the
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rubbish
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produced
by any country has reached to an alarming level. In this essay, I shall discuss the reasons for this, and recommend the possible ways that a
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government
can
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help
.

One of the main reasons in the increment of
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rubbish
is
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because
the products are being
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
once or not getting recycled.
For example
, plastic bags
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used
in grocery shopping are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
once and thrown away in the
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waste
.
As a result
it increases the
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rubbish
and
finally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
dumped into the sea, damaging the sea life habitat.
Moreover
, one of the recent statistics
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
that paper
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waste
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produced
the most amount of
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rubbish
last year. Offices, industries and schools are using
unnecessarily
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a lot of
Use "paperer" to make a comparison with this adjective.
paper
than ever
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before
.
Consequently
, the increase demand in paper industry has called for extreme deforestation, in result destroying the natural environment.

On the other hand
,
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government
can take steps to decrease the
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rubbish
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produced
every year. One of the steps could be to introduce strict laws to recycle
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waste
Consider replacing "in a sustainable way" with the adverb for "sustainable"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a sustainable way
.
For instance
,
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waste
paper can
be recycled
to
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make
packaging material for industries,
significantly
reducing the
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rubbish
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produced
overall
. Another way could be to forbid the usage of plastic bags in shopping places. This could
be replaced
by carrying bags made up of
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rubbish
products, and
furthermore
be charged
for it.

In conclusion
, one of the major reasons for increased
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rubbish
is due to non-recycling of products. This could
be resolved
by implementing new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
and regulations by the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
.
Nevertheless
, the combine effort from the individuals and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
can lead us to a clean environment.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 26

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
272 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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