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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v.24

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 24
One of the most conspicuous trends in today's world is household rubbish. Some people believe that increasing wastes from kitchens are increasing at an alarming rate and polluting natural resources. On the other hand, others argue that government failed in managing or educating citizens in waste management. In my view, the government should monitor waste disposal and recycle to restore balance in the natural resources. Firstly, the most preponderant rubbish that is causing chaos globally is plastic bags; however, plastic can be recycled most of the quantity of plastic is mixed up in rivers and polluting fresh water. In addition, food processing units are also using more wraps and covers that are generating more proportion of waste compared to any other litter. For example, many grocery stores used plastic bags to carry goods. Needless to say, poor management and lack of recycling knowledge are the reason for most of the landfill is covered by plastic. Secondly, by introducing recycling outlets and pricing recyclable waste can reduce the escalating dumping of trash. Furthermore, by replacing carry bags from plastic to cotton or paper which are biodegreadable to reduce the cost of transporting waste. For example, every landlord can allocate some place to compost their food litter into the compost pit to use it as fertilizer for plants. Hence, government regulations and waste pricing can reduce increasing rubbish dumping. In conclusion, one can clearly understand that to reduce production cost plastic is used in manufacturing food items and government waste management laws can help to control landfills. Finally, the role of recycling is too dire to ignore.
One of the most conspicuous trends in
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today
's world is household rubbish.
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Some
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people
believe that increasing
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wastes
from kitchens are increasing at an alarming rate and polluting natural resources.
On the other hand
, others argue that
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government
failed in managing or educating citizens in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
management. In my view, the
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government
should monitor
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waste
disposal and recycle to restore balance in the natural resources.

Firstly
, the most preponderant rubbish
that is
causing chaos globally is
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plastic
bags;
however
,
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plastic
can
be recycled
most of the quantity of
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plastic
is mixed
up in rivers and polluting fresh water.
In addition
, food processing units are
also
using more wraps and covers that are generating more proportion of
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waste
compared to any other litter.
For example
,
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many
grocery stores
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used
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plastic
bags to carry
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goods
. Needless to say, poor management and lack of recycling knowledge are the reason for most of the landfill
is covered
by plastic.

Secondly
, by introducing recycling outlets and pricing recyclable
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waste
can
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reduce
the escalating dumping of trash.
Furthermore
, by replacing carry bags from
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plastic
to cotton or paper which are
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biodegreadable
to
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reduce
the cost of transporting
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waste
.
For example
, every landlord can allocate
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some
place to compost their food litter into the compost pit to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
it as fertilizer for plants.
Hence
,
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government
regulations and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
pricing can
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reduce
increasing rubbish dumping.

In conclusion
, one can
clearly
understand that to
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reduce
production cost
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plastic
is
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used
in manufacturing food items and
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government
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
management laws can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to control landfills.
Finally
, the role of recycling is too dire to
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ignore
.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 24

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
265 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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