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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v.23

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 23
The amount of garbage produced in the world has drastically increased over the years. While this may be largely attributed to the waste produced by industries and factories, individual contribution towards it cannot be denied. Today, the world produces more than it can consume. From large commodities like vehicles to small consumables including food items and other daily needs, we simply have too much to systematically consume and dispose. On top of it, when it comes to waste management, humans are certainly not the best examples out there. Furthermore, in the era of instantly consumable goods, the concept of reusing seems alien. Similarly, the practice of recycling waste is not as prevalent as it should be. All these factors have resulted in huge piles of rubbish around the world. This ever-increasing pile is also the product of a rapidly growing population that remains largely uneducated/unaware. The habit of accumulating things we don't need and lax government policies only add fuel to the fire. The solution might seem complicated, but it is actually very simple. Industrial waste can be controlled to a great extent if governments around the world introduce strict laws with stricter punishments. However, in order to ensure that each citizen complies with government policies, large-scale campaigns need to come into effect. With the help of influences, citizens ought to be reminded that producing less rubbish is their moral obligation towards mother earth. Unless governments come together and formulate a uniform plan that encourages recycling, the 'rubbish situation' is bound to worsen.
The amount of garbage produced in the
world
has
drastically
increased over the years. While this may be
largely
attributed to the
waste
produced by industries and factories, individual contribution towards it cannot
be denied
.

Today
, the
world
produces more than it can consume. From large commodities like vehicles to
small
consumables including food items and other daily needs, we
simply
have too much to
systematically
consume and dispose. On top of it, when it
comes
to
waste
management, humans are
certainly
not the best examples out there.
Furthermore
, in the era of
instantly
consumable
goods
, the concept of reusing seems alien.
Similarly
, the practice of recycling
waste
is not as prevalent as it should be. All these factors have resulted in huge piles of rubbish around the
world
. This ever-increasing pile is
also
the product of a
rapidly
growing population that remains
largely
uneducated/unaware. The habit of accumulating things we don't need and lax
government
policies
only
add
fuel to the fire.

The solution might seem complicated,
but
it is actually
very
simple. Industrial
waste
can
be controlled
to a great extent if
governments
around the
world
introduce strict laws with stricter punishments.
However
, in order to ensure that each citizen complies with
government
policies, large-scale campaigns need to
come
into effect. With the
help
of influences, citizens ought to
be reminded
that producing less rubbish is their moral obligation towards mother earth.

Unless
governments
come
together and formulate a uniform plan that encourages recycling, the 'rubbish situation'
is bound
to worsen.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 23

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
6.5
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