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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words. v.21

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 21
Recently, the amount of garbage productions has been in raise. this is occurring due to the lack of awareness in terms of having a terminology to treat the pointed problem, however, the countries have to provide a systematic action to reduce the risks of ongoing issue. In the recent time, the increased rubbish is one of the curial matters, the cause of that is people are not aware how to deal with the left overs, in the other words, they can't reckon how an individual approach matters, particularly when it comes to environment poisoning materials for along term, such as plastic, for example, many developed countires has a recycling system, that is implemented and monitored on daily bases, therefore, nations have to follow the process with a proper guidance, but for other nations it is not even known, resulting in less sense of responsibility toward the mentioned concern. It is important to mention the role of the authorities to tackle such an affair, mainly because the reduction of producing trash is not limited to a group of peolpe, but its wider than that, as new generation are more likely to use diposiable item due to modren lifestyles, thus, developing a pattern of recycling system that belonges to an specialized unit would likely to be the best solution, also provide instructions and directions in order to be applied by the population in an effective manner, resulting in having lower rates of compiled trash over all, for example, in China, most of the local restaurants are equiped with garbage bages in which have segregation by the sort of the items, so each person is responsible of clean up the leftovers over according to that order. In conclusion, high records of rubbish mostly caused by the lack of information associated with not having a methodology in which contributes to solve in raise issue, so maximize the awareness and creation of systematical approach can minimize production of garbages in the countries.
Recently, the amount of garbage productions has been in raise.
this
is occurring due to the lack of awareness in terms of having a terminology to treat the pointed problem,
however
, the countries
have to
provide a systematic action to
reduce
the
risks
of ongoing issue.

In the recent time, the increased rubbish is one of the
curial
matters, the cause of
that is
people
are not aware how to deal with the
left
overs, in the other words, they can't reckon how an individual approach matters,
particularly
when it
comes
to environment poisoning materials for along term, such as plastic,
for example
,
many
developed
countires
has a recycling system, that
is implemented
and monitored on daily bases,
therefore
, nations
have to
follow the process with a proper guidance,
but
for other nations it is not even known, resulting in less sense of responsibility toward the mentioned concern.

It is
important
to mention the role of the authorities to tackle such an affair,
mainly
because
the reduction of producing trash is not limited to a group of
peolpe
,
but
its wider than that, as new generation are more likely to
use
diposiable
item due to
modren
lifestyles,
thus
, developing a pattern of recycling system that
belonges
to
an
specialized unit would likely to be the best solution,
also
provide instructions and directions in order to
be applied
by the population
in an effective manner
, resulting in having lower rates of compiled trash over all,
for example
, in China, most of the local restaurants are
equiped
with garbage
bages
in which have segregation by the sort of the items,
so
each person is
responsible of
clean up the leftovers over according to that order.

In conclusion
, high records of rubbish
mostly
caused by the lack of information associated with not having a methodology in which contributes to solve in raise issue,
so
maximize the awareness and creation of
systematical
approach can minimize production of
garbages
in the countries.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 21

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
327 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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