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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. v.20

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 20
It is indeed true that in almost every country today each household and family produce a large amount of garbage. Most of this rubbish comes from the packaging from the things we buy, such as processed food and the plastic bags that can be used to carry items. I think, the government should impose stricter rules to reduce the waste generated. The reason why we have so much packaging is that we consume so much more on a daily basis than families did in the past. Convenience is also very important in modern life, so we buy packaging or canned food that can be transported from long distances and stored until we need it, first in the supermarket, and then at home. However, I think the amount of waste produced is also a result of our tendency to use something once and throw it away. We forget that even the cheapest plastic bag has used up valuable resources and energy to produce. We also forget that it is a source of pollution and difficult to dispose of. I think, therefore, that governments need to raise this awareness in the general public. Children can be educated about environmental issues at school, but adults need to take action. Governments can encourage such action by putting taxes on packaging, such as plastic bags, by providing recycling services and by thing households and shops that do not attempt to recycle their waste. With the political will, such measures could really reduce the amount of rubbish we produce. Certainly nobody wants to see our resources used up our planet and poisoned by waste.
It is
indeed
true that in almost every country
today
each household and family produce a large amount of garbage. Most of this rubbish
comes
from the
packaging
from the things we
buy
, such as processed food and the plastic bags that can be
used
to carry items. I
think
, the
government
should impose stricter
rules
to
reduce
the waste generated.

The reason why we have
so
much
packaging
is that we consume
so
much more on a daily basis than families did in the past. Convenience is
also
very
important
in modern life,
so
we
buy
packaging
or canned food that can
be transported
from long distances and stored until we need it,
first
in the supermarket, and then at home.

However
, I
think
the amount of waste produced is
also
a result of our tendency to
use
something once and throw it away. We forget that even the cheapest plastic bag has
used
up valuable resources and energy to produce. We
also
forget that it is a source of pollution and difficult to dispose of.

I
think
,
therefore
, that
governments
need to raise this awareness in the
general public
. Children can
be educated
about environmental issues at school,
but
adults need to take action.
Governments
can encourage such action by putting taxes on
packaging
, such as plastic bags, by providing recycling services and by thing households and shops that do not attempt to recycle their waste.

With the political will, such measures could
really
reduce
the amount of rubbish we produce.
Certainly
nobody wants to
see
our resources
used
up our planet and poisoned by waste.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 20

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
268 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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