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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v.19

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 19
In this contemporary era, The population is increasingly growing at an exponential pace which is consequently generating a great amount of misuse. This essay intends to elucidate the causes and solutions which can be taken by the bureaucrats to minimize the misuse in the following paragraphs. There are several attributes for the causes. To embark on, an increase in population in the majority of the cities. In other words, household and industrial misuse in cities are rising at a greater extent. Thus creating a way to generate more misuse and garbage. For instance, a recent toll conducted by researchers state that industries and daily household rubbish contribute 70% of overall misuse in the city. Furthermore, Rise in consumerism is being most problematic. This means, demand of products and services is drastically increasing, leading to more number of misuse. Finally, lack of recycling products like plastic and paper is being one of the major problems. However, there are some viable measures which can be taken by the government bodies to overcome this negative effect, Firstly, The Government should impose strict rules on discarding misuse materials. In other words, strict rules make industries to limit the manufacture of goods which results in less waste. Secondly, the government should increase the price of goods and services, thus help the masses to minimise the use of goods which results in misuse. Lastly, awareness should be created to recycle the products and reuse. All these factors result in minimising the waste being thrown in the city and thus help keep surrounding clean. To recapitulate, Despite the facts that increase in industrial and household activity has lead to rise in misuse production. I believe that the government should take necessary actions by imposing stringent rules to minimise the drain. This will help in keeping the city clean and can eradicate numerous disease at a great extent.
In this contemporary era, The population is
increasingly
growing at an exponential pace which is
consequently
generating a great amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
misuse
. This essay intends to elucidate the causes and solutions which can
be taken
by the bureaucrats to minimize the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
misuse
in the following paragraphs.

There are several attributes for the causes. To embark on, an increase in population in the majority of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cities
.
In other words
, household and industrial
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
misuse
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cities
are rising at a greater extent.
Thus
creating a way to generate more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
misuse
and garbage.
For instance
, a recent toll conducted by researchers state that industries and daily household rubbish contribute 70% of
overall
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misuse
in the city.
Furthermore
, Rise in consumerism is being most problematic. This means, demand of products and services is
drastically
increasing, leading to more number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
misuse
.
Finally
, lack of recycling products like plastic and paper is being one of the major problems.

However
, there are
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some
viable measures which can
be taken
by the
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government
bodies to overcome this
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negative
effect,
Firstly
, The
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Government
should impose strict
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
on discarding
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misuse
materials.
In other words
, strict
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
industries to limit the manufacture of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
which results in less waste.
Secondly
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
should increase the price of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
and services,
thus
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
the masses to
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minimise
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
which results in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
misuse
.
Lastly
, awareness should
be created
to recycle the products and reuse. All these factors result in
Do not mix variants of the same word ('minimise' and 'minimize') within a single text.
minimising
the waste
being thrown
in the city and
thus
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
surrounding clean.

To recapitulate, Despite the facts that increase in industrial and household activity has lead to rise in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
misuse
production. I believe that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
should take necessary actions by imposing stringent
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
to
Do not mix variants of the same word ('minimise' and 'minimize') within a single text.
minimise
the drain. This will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in keeping the city clean and can eradicate numerous disease at a great extent.
19Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 19

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
310 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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