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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.18

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 18
Today world is witnessing the increase in waste due to several reasons. Although people are causing more rubbish in their surroundings which is a bigger hazard to to the globe. This essay will elaborate the reasons why it is happening, and what can be done by authorities to minimise the rubbish. There are many reasons due to which it is occurring as people do not care about their surroundings and throw the garbages on the roadside when they are out or visit in any area or country. Due to overpopulation, rubbish is getting increased at a rapid pace which is not good for future generation as it contributes in scarcity of resources. A research has been carried out by the world bank in which 10 nations had been surveyed on the basis of waste produced by them and vanishing it. Therefore, these are the causes why rubbish is rising. In contrast, the authorities can aware the citizens to control their rubbish which they are producing as it causes environmental issues. By conducting seminars on the environment can be beneficial for the government to spread information regarding the impacts of increasing garbage in the society. Also, by putting a fine on those who produce excessive rubbish would be an appropriate measure to reform the people. Hence, by taking small initiatives governments can remove or decrease the garbage around the word. To conclude, I would like to state that rubbish is getting increased due to many factors which are responsible for it that can be solved by taking some serious steps by the officials of the nations.
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Today
world is witnessing the increase in waste
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due
to several reasons.
“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
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people
are causing more
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rubbish
in their surroundings which is a bigger hazard
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to to
the globe. This essay will elaborate the reasons why it is happening, and what can
be done
by authorities to
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minimise
the rubbish.

There are
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many
reasons
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due
to which it is occurring as
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people
do not care about their surroundings and throw the
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garbages on
the roadside when they are out or visit in any area or country.
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Due
to overpopulation,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rubbish
is getting increased at a rapid pace which is not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
for future generation as it contributes in scarcity of resources.
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "research".
A research
has
been carried
out by the
If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.
world bank
in which 10 nations had
been surveyed
on the basis of waste produced by them and vanishing it.
Therefore
, these are the causes why
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rubbish
is rising.

In contrast
, the authorities can aware the citizens to control their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rubbish
which they are producing as it causes environmental issues. By conducting seminars on the environment can be beneficial for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
to spread information regarding the impacts of increasing garbage in the society.
Also
, by putting a fine on those who produce excessive
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rubbish
would be an appropriate measure to reform the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.
Hence
, by taking
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
initiatives
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
governments
can remove or decrease the garbage around the word.

To conclude
, I would like to state that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rubbish
is getting increased
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
due
to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
factors which are responsible for it that can
be solved
by taking
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
serious steps by the officials of the nations.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 18

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
265 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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