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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words. v.15

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 15
There has been an increase in the amount of rubbish produced in the recent years. Although there are various reasons for this trend, fortunately there are also steps that governments can take to overcome this problem. There are numerous reasons for the increase in the production of the rubbish. Firstly, the rise in the use of the disposable containers has contributed a lot to this problem. Most of the items sold nowadays in the markets are packaged in the single use containers. For instance, fruits are sold in non-reusable plastic boxes which are thrown away. This has resulted in the increase in the amount of waste generated daily. Secondly, plastic is now widely used since it is cheap and easily manufactured, but it is hard to recycle. Currently, there are no significant efforts to recycle all types of plastic. Since there are not many recycling plants, plastic is disposed rather than being recycled. Luckily, governments can take measures to reduce the production of rubbish. First, the use of reusable items should be promoted. For example, reusable bags should be used to decrease the use of plastic bags. Also, the use of the plastic can be reduced by putting additional taxes on the manufacturers. This will increase the price of the material and promote the use of alternate materials. Furthermore, recycling should be promoted, so that waste material can be reused without damaging the environment. Lastly, governments should spread awareness among people regarding the environmental risks associated with the production of waste. In conclusion, the amount of waste produced is increasing daily at an alarming rate. However, governments can overcome this problem by promoting recycling and the use of reusable containers.
There has been an
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increase
in the amount of rubbish produced in the recent years. Although there are various reasons for this trend,
fortunately
there are
also
steps that
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governments
can take to overcome this problem.

There are numerous reasons for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increase
in the production of the rubbish.
Firstly
, the rise in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of the disposable containers has contributed a lot to this problem. Most of the items sold nowadays in the markets
are packaged
in the single
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
containers.
For instance
, fruits
are sold
in non-reusable
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plastic
boxes which
are thrown
away. This has resulted in the
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increase
in the amount of waste generated daily.
Secondly
,
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plastic
is
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now
widely
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used
since it is
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cheap
and
easily
manufactured,
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but
it is
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hard
to recycle.
Currently
, there are no significant efforts to recycle all types of
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plastic
. Since there are not
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many
recycling plants,
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plastic
is disposed
rather
than
being recycled
.

Luckily,
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governments
can take measures to
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reduce
the production of rubbish.
First
, the
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use
of reusable items should
be promoted
.
For example
, reusable bags should be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to decrease the
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use
of
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plastic
bags.
Also
, the
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use
of the
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plastic
can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
by putting additional taxes on the manufacturers. This will
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increase
the price of the material and promote the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of alternate materials.
Furthermore
, recycling should
be promoted
,
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so
that waste material can
be reused
without damaging the environment.
Lastly
,
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governments
should spread awareness among
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people
regarding the environmental
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risks
associated with the production of waste.

In conclusion
, the amount of waste produced is increasing daily at an alarming rate.
However
,
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governments
can overcome this problem by promoting recycling and the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of reusable containers.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 15

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
280 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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