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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v.14

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 14
The number of litters in the society has increased significantly over the last decade. This essay will discuss the main two causes of this issue and possible solutions for the authorities to solve it. The two primary reasons that directly contribute to this issue are the fast-trend industry and the unnecessary packaging for a product. Firstly, we are currently living in the century where everything changes so quickly. Every year, there will always be new technologies, fashions and items that cause the society to always purchase the new version, even though their current item is still functional. Additionally, many companies often use non-reusable items to package their goods. According to 'The Economist' magazine, the Unilever company uses more than 10, 000 of plastic annually for their products, which contributes to almost 60% of litter in the community. Therefore, fast-trend industry and unused packaging are the major reason of the rise in rubbish. On the other hand, the government should use their role to reduce this issue by banning non-recycled goods and raising awareness within the community. As plastic is the major contribution to litter, they need to stop every company from producing unnecessary packaging. For instance, in 2015, the Armsterdam' authorities established a regulation where companies are required to use carton boxes instead of plastic, since it can be recycled easily. In 2016, they have reduced the amount of litters by 70% annually. Moreover, they can use their platform to raise awareness in the society through advertisement and campaign. Hence, the governments have a great platform that can help to protect the environment from rubbish. In conclusion, although the increase of rubbish is due to the fast-trend industry and company's packaging, the government can prevent this problem by raising awareness and banning the use of plastic in the community.
The number of
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litters
in the society has increased
significantly
over the last decade. This essay will discuss the main two causes of this issue and possible solutions for the authorities to solve it.

The two primary reasons that
directly
contribute to this issue are the
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fast
-trend industry and the unnecessary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
packaging
for a product.
Firstly
, we are
currently
living in the century where everything
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changes
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so
quickly
. Every year, there will always be new technologies, fashions and items that cause the society to always
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purchase
the new version,
even though
their
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current
item is
still
functional.
Additionally
,
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many
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companies
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often
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use
non-reusable items to package their
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goods
. According to 'The Economist' magazine, the Unilever
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company
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uses
more than 10, 000 of
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plastic
annually
for their products, which contributes to almost 60% of
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litter
in the community.
Therefore
,
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fast
-trend industry and unused
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packaging
are the major reason of the rise in rubbish.

On the other hand
, the
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government
should
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use
their role to
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reduce
this issue by banning non-recycled
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goods
and raising awareness within the community. As
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plastic
is the major contribution to
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litter
, they need to
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stop
every
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company
from producing unnecessary
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packaging
.
For instance
, in 2015, the
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Armsterdam
' authorities established a regulation where
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companies
are required
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
carton boxes
instead
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastic
, since it can
be recycled
easily
. In 2016, they have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
the amount of
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litters
by 70%
annually
.
Moreover
, they can
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use
their platform to raise awareness in the society through advertisement and campaign.
Hence
, the
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governments
have a great platform that can
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help
to protect the environment from rubbish.

In conclusion
, although the increase of rubbish is due to the
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fast
-trend industry and
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company
's
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packaging
, the
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government
can
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prevent
this problem by raising awareness and banning the
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use
of
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plastic
in the community.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 14

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
299 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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