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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can government do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.13

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can government do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 13
It is a sad reality that littering has increased manifolds over the past few years; this is evident from our littered parks, streets, road, offices, malls, schools and other public places. This essay will first look at the reasons for this heartening increase and then suggest how government bodies can address or limit this pressing issue. In my opinion, lack of awareness is the major contributor of increase in rubbish production. This trend developed as the general public was not fully aware of the consequences of littering on the environment. To address this issue, the government should take strict policy level decisions; this includes introducing programmes, aimed at highlighting the drastic effect of pollution on our environment. These programmes can be made a compulsory part of our school curriculum and can also be tailored to reach a wider audience through paper, print and social media. Such initiatives can help in reducing the problem at hand. Another evident reason for this shocking increase in waste production is lack of accountability against people found throwing litter n public areas. This implies that people throw rubbish as they are not scared of being penalized for such actions. A few years ago I had a chance to travel to England. During my stay, I was amazed by the level of cleanliness and zero litter in public places. While inquiring from the locals on how government ensured such pollution free environment, it dawned on me that people found littering are fined over a thousand pounds. We can apply the same problem in our country. A possible solution to this worrying problem is that the government should impose heavy fines on the masses who are found littering. This will certainly set an example for the rest of people to refrain from producing waste. To conclude, increased litter is certainly an alarming issue. However, I am confident that with certain government led initiatives: including environment friendly content promotion and teaching and fines for throwing litter, we can address this problem. We, as responsible citizens, should help the government in enforcing these policies to curb this problem.
It is a sad reality that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
littering
has increased manifolds over the past few years; this is evident from our littered parks, streets, road, offices, malls, schools and other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
places. This essay will
first
look at the reasons for this heartening increase and then suggest how
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
bodies can address or limit this pressing issue.

In my opinion, lack of awareness is the major contributor of increase in rubbish production.

This trend developed as the general
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
was not
fully
aware of the consequences of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
littering
on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
. To address this issue, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
should take strict policy level decisions; this includes introducing
Possible spelling mistake. 'programmes' is British English.
programmes
, aimed at highlighting the drastic effect of pollution on our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
. These
Possible spelling mistake. 'programmes' is British English.
programmes
can
be made
a compulsory part of our school curriculum and can
also
be tailored
to reach a wider audience through paper, print and social media. Such initiatives can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in reducing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
at hand.

Another evident reason for this shocking increase in waste production is lack of accountability against
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people
found throwing
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litter
n
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public
areas.
This implies that
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people
throw rubbish as they are not scared of
being penalized
for such actions. A few years ago I had a chance to travel to England. During my stay, I
was amazed
by the level of cleanliness and zero
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
litter
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
places. While inquiring from the locals on how
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
ensured such pollution free
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
, it dawned on me that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
found
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
littering
are fined
over a thousand pounds. We can apply the same
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
in our country. A possible solution to this worrying
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
is that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
should impose heavy fines on the masses who
are found
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
littering
. This will
certainly
set an example for the rest of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to refrain from producing waste.

To conclude
, increased
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
litter
is
certainly
an alarming issue.
However
, I am confident that with certain
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
led initiatives: including
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
friendly content promotion and teaching and fines for throwing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
litter
, we can address this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
. We, as responsible citizens, should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
in enforcing these policies to curb this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problem
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
31Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can government do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 13

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
349 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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