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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v.11

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 11
Every day tons of waste are produced by humans all around the world. These rubbish consists of food leftovers, plastics, package of different products and etc. Nowadays trash production has sparked a heated debate. This essay will argue why this phenomenon is happening and also will seek what can governments come up with to decrease the pace of it. In the past, not long ago, people were living in villages and they used to provide whatever they needed to continue living, making nutrients from agricultural and breeding animal species. Those days, there was no industrial company to pack eatables and sell to individuals. For example, They made clothings from animal skins and the cotton plant. Their base materials were from nature and also organic, as a result, there was no harm to the environment. Though, after the industrial revolution, people came along each other in cities and stoped cultivating so foods started to be prepared by that company. Since then, The process of manufacturing always leaves waste behind and the act of buying foodstuffs beside all other goods started to settle among all humans. This is the main reason why waste production has increased dramatically in last decades and as it seems, it would be very hard and time consuming to control this situation unless, serious acts are held. Governments can play a significant role controlling rubbish production. For example, they can manage this situation by cutting huge taxes on companies if, they use materials which is not recyclable for their packaging or force manufacturers to use natural and organic substances in order that, it can be absorbed by mother nature. On the other hand, there will be no practical results if, people do not cooperate with their government. People can help their government by not buying artificial goods or by separating different sorts of trashes to speed up recycling. Trash turn-out has been increased as a result of consumerism. To conclude, this essay discussed the main reason why this phenomenon has occurred while giving functional suggestions for governments to decrease the pace of this act whether stoping it.
Every day tons of waste
are produced
by humans all around the world. These rubbish consists of food leftovers, plastics, package of
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different
products
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and etc
. Nowadays trash production has sparked a heated debate. This essay will argue why this phenomenon is happening and
also
will seek what can
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governments
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come
up with to decrease the pace of it.

In the past, not long ago,
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people
were living in
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
villages and
they
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used
to provide whatever they needed to continue living, making nutrients from agricultural and breeding animal species. Those days, there was no industrial
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
to pack eatables and sell to individuals.
For example
, They made
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clothings
from animal skins and the cotton plant. Their base materials were from nature and
also
organic,
as a result
, there was no harm to the environment. Though, after the industrial revolution,
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people
came along each other in cities and
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stoped
cultivating
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so
foods
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started
to
be prepared
by that
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company
. Since then, The process of manufacturing always
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leaves
waste behind and the act of buying foodstuffs beside all other
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
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started
to settle among all humans. This is the main reason why waste production has increased
dramatically
in last decades and as it seems, it would be
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very
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hard
and
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time consuming
to control this situation unless, serious acts
are held
.

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Governments
can play a significant role controlling rubbish production.
For example
, they can manage this situation by cutting huge taxes on
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companies
if, they
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use
materials which is not recyclable for their packaging or force manufacturers to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
natural and organic substances in order that, it can
be absorbed
by mother nature.
On the other hand
, there will be no practical results if,
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people
do not cooperate with their
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government
.
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People
can
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help
their
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government
by not buying artificial
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goods
or by separating
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different
sorts of trashes to
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speed up
recycling.

Trash turn-out has
been increased
as a result
of consumerism.
To conclude
, this essay discussed the main reason why this phenomenon has occurred while giving functional suggestions for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
governments
to decrease the pace of this act whether
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stoping
it.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 11

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
349 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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