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Now a days we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v.1

Now a days we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 1
It has been seen that the amount of garbage is increasing with the progress of time. This essay will explain industrial revolution as the main cause of this crucial problem and then outline how introducing a new technical device can reduce this matter. One of the main reasons of the excess amount of rubbish is the increase of production. It is observed that with the advancement of technology, new products are continuously producing. These goods come out in the market with updated qualities and features, which easily allure people to purchase more. Even if some people buy equipment just to get a new one, which actually they do not need. Thus, the growth of manufacturing enhancing the consumption pattern. As a result, trash is storing in the environment from the used goods, scraps, packaging and industrial waste. For example, the recent survey conducted by the UNEP reveals that, the 70% of the waste in the environment is creating by the industries. However, the government can ameliorate this situation by introducing waste recycle plant. It would be more effective if the authorities of the nation establish a strict law to must use such machines by the manufacturing companies. The companies can use these machines to recycle the waste as well as used goods to produce new products or destroy them. Therefore, using of such devices not only will reduce the amount of rubbish in the environment, but also generate profit for the companies. For instance, the production of rubbish has declined drastically in Bangladesh after enforcing the law by the government to big business organizations for installing garbage management machines in the factories. In conclusion, continuous new invention is one of the major cause of the extra amount of rubbish creation. Nevertheless, this issue can be mitigated by the national authorities by installing plants for waste management.
It has been
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seen
that the
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amount
of garbage is increasing with the progress of time. This essay will
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explain
industrial revolution as the main cause of this crucial problem and then outline how introducing a
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new
technical device can
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reduce
this matter.

One of the main reasons of the excess
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amount
of
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rubbish
is the increase of production. It
is observed
that with the advancement of technology,
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new
products are
continuously
producing. These
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goods
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come
out in the market with updated qualities and features, which
easily
allure
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people
to
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purchase
more. Even if
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some
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people
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buy
equipment
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just
to
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get
a
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new
one, which actually they do not need.
Thus
, the growth of manufacturing enhancing the consumption pattern.
As a result
, trash is storing in the environment from the
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used
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goods
, scraps, packaging and industrial
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waste
.
For example
, the recent survey conducted by the
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UNEP
reveals that, the 70% of the
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waste
in the environment is creating by the industries.

However
, the
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government
can ameliorate this situation by introducing
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waste
recycle plant. It would be more effective if the authorities of the nation establish a strict law to
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must
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use
such machines by the manufacturing
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companies
. The
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companies
can
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use
these machines to recycle the
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waste
as well
as
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used
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goods
to produce
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new
products or
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destroy
them.
Therefore
, using of such devices not
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only
will
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reduce
the
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amount
of
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rubbish
in the environment,
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but
also
generate profit for the
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companies
.
For instance
, the production of
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rubbish
has declined
drastically
in Bangladesh after enforcing the law by the
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government
to
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big
business organizations for installing garbage management machines in the factories.

In conclusion
, continuous
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new
invention is one of the major cause of the extra
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amount
of
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rubbish
creation.
Nevertheless
, this issue can
be mitigated
by the national authorities by installing plants for
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waste
management.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS essay Now a days we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
306 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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