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The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

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The line graph displays the percentage of Australian exports to four countries - China, Japan, India, and the United States - from 1990 to 2012. Overall, exports to the United States and Japan decreased whereas those to India and China increased during the period. While Japan and the US experienced a similar downward trend in terms of the portion of exports from Australia, that of Japan has been twice as much as the US through the report. To be precise, in 1990, exports to Japan were the highest among other countries, over 25%, on the other hand, the US had roughly half that amount in that year. Although exports to the US fluctuated around 10% until 2005, they finally declined to well under 10% in 2012. Conversely, the figures for India and China displayed an upward trend. Notably, both started well under 5% in 1990, but China's rate soared in 2000 and left a big gap with India, which stood at 30% in 2012 and allocated the highest share in that year.
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Overall Band Score: 8
Task Achievement
7.5
The task is generally well-accomplished with clear highlighting of key features and overall trends, but slightly lacks detail in some parts.
Lexical Resource
8
The vocabulary is well-suited for the task, using terms like 'downward trend' and 'soared.' There is sufficient vocabulary range without repetition.
Coherence & Cohesion
7.5
The passage presents information in a structured way, starting with an introduction and concluding with a clear overview. The body paragraphs are logically sequenced with some use of linking words, but some sentences might benefit from clearer transitions.
Grammatical Range
8
The response uses various sentence types including complex and compound sentences. There are few grammatical errors.

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