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The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Café, by season.

The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Café, by season.

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The bar graph below depicts average daily sales of Hot Coffee, Iced Coffee, Ice cream, Soup, Salad at the Brisk Cafe in Summer and Winter season. Overall it can be seen that in cold season, Hot coffee was popular whereas in hot weather Iced coffee was at the peak. The salad remain constant during both the seasons. In winter season, the number of servings for Hot coffee was around 75 while in summer season it was only able to reach around 30. The Iced coffee servings was very marginal in cold weather which was only around 2 while it rose up to 40 in hot weather. Ice cream was so much popular in summer season which able to manage the servings around 35 but it declined in winter and remained 25 only. Moreover, Salad was constant in both the years which served only 25 customer while soup was at the peak in winter which was doubled than summer which account 50 servings per day in winter.
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Overall Band Score: 6.5
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The task is addressed effectively, with an introduction, overview, and detailed comparisons. However, some data representation could be clearer.
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The vocabulary is simple and lacks variety. There are some repetitions, and limited use of advanced vocabulary related to the task.
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The response is organized with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, transitions could be smoother, and ideas could be more logically connected.
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6.5
The response includes a mix of simple and complex sentences but is marred by grammatical errors.

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