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The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

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Compound Complex Sentence

Overall Band Score: 6.5
Task Achievement
7
The task is addressed with data comparisons, but some inaccuracies in data description are present.
Lexical Resource
6.5
The variety of vocabulary is good but could be expanded. Some phrases and word choices are awkward or repetitive.
Coherence & Cohesion
6.5
The response includes an introduction and details, but overall organization and cohesion could be improved. Linking words are used, but not always effectively leading to some confusing comparisons.
Grammatical Range
6.5
There is a mix of sentence types, but errors in structure and punctuation reduce effectiveness.

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