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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Other believes that some information is too important or too valuable to share freely. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion. v.8

Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Other believes that some information is too important or too valuable to share freely. v. 8
Some people might think that advantages of publishing more information in every fields outweigh its optimal sharing, while some strongly believe that researcher should not show important data to freely publish in order to achieve their objectives. Until now, there are many routes to search data either free access or pay money. The reasons for this are concerned with sharing total data is a good way to be successful. One advantage of publishing as much as possible is organization could sharply communicate citizen to learn how to develop skill in their new careers especially in economic turn down situation. This makes an individual become an expert in certain job. Moreover, the students have an opportunity to acquire reliable knowledge in order to solve their problems outside classrooms when they cannot contact professors. Although, many information have been published easily but these had not proved for accuracy. This must have been checked reliable resources before apply in objective. On the other hand, the crucial data tend to be privacy in company and it must have limited persons to look for these such as strategy or budget. This is the reason that competitors might plagiarism in management and planning. However, there are some disadvantages, for example in medical research, doctor and healthcare provider cannot access data in update new technology or guidelines in order to deal with new epidemic disease or complicated patients. In conclusion, it is difficult to share freely all types of information because beneficial for inventers. On balance I believe that the reason of post valuable data will make the world change better. Finally, this important as it is both generating education and income in the countries.
Some
people
might
think
that advantages of publishing more information in every
fields
outweigh its optimal sharing, while
some
strongly
believe that researcher should not
show
important
data
to
freely
publish in order to achieve their objectives. Until
now
, there are
many
routes to search
data
either free access or pay money. The reasons for this
are concerned
with sharing total
data
is a
good
way to be successful.

One advantage of publishing as much as possible is organization could
sharply
communicate citizen to learn how to develop
skill
in their new careers
especially
in economic turn down situation. This
makes
an individual become an expert in certain job.
Moreover
, the students have an opportunity to acquire reliable knowledge in order to solve their problems outside classrooms when they cannot contact professors. Although,
many information
have
been published
easily
but
these had not proved for accuracy. This
must
have been
checked
reliable resources
before
apply in objective.

On the other hand
, the crucial
data
tend to be privacy in
company
and it
must
have limited persons to look for these such as strategy or budget. This is the reason that competitors might plagiarism in management and planning.
However
, there are
some
disadvantages,
for example
in medical research, doctor and healthcare provider cannot access
data
in update new technology or guidelines in order to deal with new epidemic disease or complicated patients.

In conclusion
, it is difficult to share
freely
all types of information
because
beneficial for
inventers
. On
balance I
believe that the reason of post valuable
data
will
make
the world
change
better.
Finally
, this
important
as it is both generating education and income in the countries.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
6Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Other believes that some information is too important or too valuable to share freely. v. 8

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
6
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