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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. v.25

Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. v. 25
In today's world knowledge is very important for all. Common consensus that the word is being interest must be correct in aspects of regular basis and must be analysed before sharing. While the other hand, some say that everyone has free access to some instruction. Here it will discuss which factor in more important. Number of people argue that knowledge must be shared after proper research and consider the accuracy of that material. They think so because some wrong material can spread panic among the masses which lefts negative impact on society. So complete analysis is required, whether that tip is scientifically correct and provide it provides an educational point of view. In the past the outbreak of Cronavirus was a major disaster for all over the world, but China and all other countries play their important role in the regard of the message. They part accurate and possible report in scientific behaviour and educational point of view. So I suggest that it will well for all of us when we percentage instruction in the right path of modern research. While on the other hand, some people rely on free sharing contributions of science because some types of knowledge are very important for common people. For the favour of public these types of info must be shared freely. Some information directly concerns to society. The most important message is about inflation rate and everyone wants to know about the prices of Goods those mentioned by officials. These types of data must be shared all over without any delay. To sum up, advice related diseases and other important recent happening must be fulfilled the requirements of correctness and another report that relates to common people must be accessed everywhere.
In
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today
's world knowledge is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
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important
for all. Common consensus that the word is being interest
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must
be correct in aspects of regular basis and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be
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analysed
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before
sharing. While the
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other
hand,
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some
say that everyone has free access to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
instruction. Here it will discuss which factor in more
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
.

Number of
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people
argue that knowledge
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be shared
after proper research and consider the accuracy of that material. They
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
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some
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wrong
material can spread panic among the masses which lefts
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
impact on society.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
complete analysis
is required
, whether that tip is
scientifically
correct and provide it provides an educational point of view. In the past the outbreak of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Cronavirus
was a major disaster for all over the world,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
China and all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
countries play their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
important
role in the regard of the message. They part accurate and possible report in scientific
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behaviour
and educational point of view.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
I suggest that it will well for all of us when
Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'we'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
we percentage
instruction in the right path of modern research.

While on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
hand,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
rely on free sharing contributions of science
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
types of knowledge are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
important
for common
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
. For the
Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.
favour
of public these types of info
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be shared
freely
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
information
directly
concerns to society. The most
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
important
message is about inflation rate and everyone wants to know about the prices of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Goods
those mentioned by officials. These types of data
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be shared
all over without any delay.

To sum up, advice related diseases and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
important
recent happening
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be fulfilled
the requirements of correctness and another report that relates to common
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be accessed
everywhere.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. v. 25

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
288 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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