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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give tour own opinion. v.16

Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. v. 16
People have different opinions regarding to share the information is too necessarily and valuable to be contributed free of cost. In my opinion, knowledge is power, so share the information is an essential part of the life. One information to share with other people and get the most valuable information. I will discuss both of the views in my further writing. It is started with the more data share is possible in scientific research, business, The academic world. However, nowadays it is not possible to share the any information to everybody. There are some reason, for instance, one person share the data about a road instruction and all scientific research listen this idea. Although one scientific robbery this idea and used for doing the wrong work. That is creating a big problem in other countries. On the other hand, data shared freely is significant and valuable because to enhance their knowledge or value in all over the world. Moreover, a good idea is changing the country life and thinking also. In the modern era, people do not share the ownership idea. If those people share the facts to an another person so they get the most money. People are most selfishness in own duties which is not understandable, whey they are present them to the public. In conclusion, in my opinion that people share many particulars about their business work, research or The academic work. If share more detail in coming days country will make progress. Person's life will be easy also feel comfortable and relaxed.
People
have
different
opinions
regarding to
share
the
information
is too
necessarily
and valuable to
be contributed
free of cost. In my opinion, knowledge is power,
so
share
the
information
is an essential part of the life. One
information
to
share
with other
people
and
get
the most valuable
information
. I will discuss both of the views in my
further
writing.

It is
started
with the more data
share
is possible in scientific research, business,

The academic world.
However
, nowadays it is not possible to
share
the any
information
to everybody. There are
some
reason,
for instance
, one person
share
the data about a road instruction and all scientific research listen this
idea
. Although one scientific robbery this
idea
and
used
for doing the
wrong
work.
That is
creating a
big
problem in other countries.

On the other hand
, data shared
freely
is significant and valuable
because
to enhance their knowledge or value in all over the world.
Moreover
, a
good
idea
is changing the country life and thinking
also
. In the modern era,
people
do not
share
the ownership
idea
. If those
people
share
the facts to
an another person
so
they
get
the most money.
People
are most selfishness in
own
duties which is not understandable, whey they are present them to the public.

In conclusion
, in my opinion that
people
share
many
particulars about their business work, research or The academic work.
If
share
more detail in coming days country will
make
progress. Person's life will be easy
also
feel comfortable and relaxed.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
25Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. v. 16

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
256 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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