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some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific reseach, business and the academic world. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be share freely v.1

some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific reseach, business and the academic world. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be share freely v. 1
Based on some opinion, sharing as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world is a recommendation that promises to bring about profound benefits. Nevertheless, some information that is of paramount importance or holds a significant level of value should suggestively be used exclusively rather than shared inclusively. Personally judging, despite both perspectives possessing a degree of accuracy, publishing research documents publicly to reach the most significant audience helps improve the research itself while promoting growth for the entire scientific scope. On the one hand, having research information reached as many people as possible not only enhances the process of having the journal assessed critically, but also improves other academic articles in the same field. In detail, despite the tremendous effort that counts by blood and soul to produce a research journal, flaws inevitably exist as a nature of every circumstance that involves humans. Thus, every published research generally receives a process of criticism from other experts in the field, which ultimately identifies the problems for which authors can take the advantage to improve in the future. Also, by reviewing information in a research result, other authors that focus on closely-related topics may advance their own articles, which eventually boosts the advancement of the whole field. On the other hand, unfinished research topics that laws and regulations are insufficient to protect the contained information require a different approach to preserve confidentiality. In detail, laws systems start protecting information in research from copyright infringement after the journals have the publishment on official platforms. However, for younger scientists or people with the lack of ability to publish scientific research, sharing it can incline the probability of having the information used illegally by others. To conclude, despite the fear of letting the research that has consumed not only effort but academic performances of authors use by others, publishing research officially is promised to produce the best benefits of having it protected by laws and improving the research result
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, business, and the academic world is a recommendation that promises to bring about profound benefits.
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some
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information
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used
exclusively
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inclusively
.
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research
documents
publicly
to reach the most significant audience
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helps
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improve
the
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itself while promoting growth for the entire scientific scope.

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information
reached as
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people
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critically
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also
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improves
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other
academic articles in the same field. In detail, despite the tremendous effort that counts by blood and soul to produce a
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research
journal, flaws
inevitably
exist as a nature of every circumstance that involves humans.
Thus
, every published
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research
generally
receives a process of criticism from
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other
experts in the field, which
ultimately
identifies the problems for which authors can take the advantage to
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improve
in the future.
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, by reviewing
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information
in a
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result,
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other
authors that focus on
closely
-related topics may advance their
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own
articles, which
eventually
boosts the advancement of the whole field.

On the
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other
hand, unfinished
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research
topics that laws and regulations are insufficient to protect the contained
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information
require a
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different
approach to preserve confidentiality. In detail, laws systems
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protecting
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in
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from copyright infringement after the journals have the
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publishment
on official platforms.
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, for younger scientists or
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people
with the lack of ability to publish scientific
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research
, sharing it can incline the probability of
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having
the
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information
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used
illegally
by others.

To conclude
, despite the fear of letting the
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research
that has consumed not
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only
effort
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but
academic performances of authors
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use
by others, publishing
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research
officially
is promised
to produce the best benefits of
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having
it protected by laws and improving the
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research
result
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28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific reseach, business and the academic world. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be share freely v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
328 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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