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Your work in an international company. You need to take some time off work. Write a letter to your employer. In your letterExplain why you need this time offgive details of when you want the time offsay who can do your work when you are awayWrite at least v.2

Your work in an international company. You need to take some time off work. Write a letter to your employer. In your letterExplain why you need this time offgive details of when you want the time offsay who can do your work when you are awayWrite at least v. 2
Dear Mr Smith, I hope this serves you well. Since our international foundation is serious to appoint off days a week earlier As it’s 50th anniversary of my parents all the children are going to gather together and make a party I need some off days. Let me explain you in details, From the last year my father passed that chronic illness. He had turned to a disappointed elder and whole the family were worry about him, further we decided to make a surprise plan. so, as you are aware I’m so far from them and I have to change two airplanes to get destination, Hence I need a week from 24th august to 30 august to spend some times with them. Furthermore, Miss Keen who were trained by me about a couple months ago could be the best person to be in charge of my duties, even though I will do all the serious matters remotely. Your assistance in this matter is greatly appreciated. Your sincerely, Chi Chung
Dear Mr Smith,

I hope this serves you well. Since our international foundation is serious to appoint off days a week earlier
As
it’s
50th anniversary of my parents all the children are going to gather together and
make
a party I need
some
off days.

Let
me
explain
you in
details
, From the last year my father passed that chronic illness. He had turned to a disappointed elder and whole the family
were
worry about him,
further
we decided to
make
a surprise plan.

so
, as you are aware I’m
so
far from them and I
have to
change
two airplanes to
get
destination,
Hence
I need a week from 24th august to 30 august to spend
some
times with them.

Furthermore
, Miss Keen who
were trained
by me about a
couple
months ago could be the best person to be in charge of my duties,
even though
I will do all the serious matters
remotely
. Your assistance in this matter is
greatly
appreciated.

Your
sincerely
,

Chi Chung
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS letter Your work in an international company. You need to take some time off work. Write a letter to your employer. In your letterExplain why you need this time offgive details of when you want the time offsay who can do your work when you are awayWrite at least v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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