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You work in an international company. You need to take some time off work. Write a letter toyour employer. In your letter: -Explain why you need this time off-give details of when you want the time off-say who can do your work when you are away v.2

You work in an international company. You need to take some time off work. Write a letter toyour employer. In your letter: -Explain why you need this time off-give details of when you want the time off-say who can do your work when you are away v. 2
Dear Mr. John, I am writing this letter to you to grant me a permission to take a vacation from work. As you know, I am studying master degree in Human Resources which not only broaden my professional skills but also develop my managerial competencies. I have been studying for the more than two years in order to gain the master. I will be taking the exam on 21st of March so that I would like to have two weeks before the exam to prepare and I will return back on Sunday morning after the exam. According to our company policy, I am entitled to take two weeks consecutively to be deducted from annual leave balance. Therefore, I will delegate my colleague David Peter to act as my backup during my absence because he has been working with me since I have commenced my job here, so I will hold a training session for him to undertake my tasks. In the end, thank you for your attention to this matter, and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Mina Michael
Dear Mr. John,

I am writing this letter to you to grant me a permission to take a vacation from work. As you know, I am studying master degree in Human Resources which not
only
broaden my professional
skills
but
also
develop my managerial competencies. I have been studying for the more than two years in order to gain the master.

I will be taking the exam on 21st of March
so
that I would like to have two weeks
before
the exam to prepare and I will
return back
on Sunday morning after the exam. According to our
company
policy, I
am entitled
to take two weeks
consecutively
to
be deducted
from annual
leave
balance.

Therefore
, I will delegate my colleague David Peter to act as my backup during my absence
because
he has been working with me since I have commenced my job here,
so
I will hold a training session for him to undertake my tasks.

In the
end
, thank you for your attention to this matter, and I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
,

Mina
Michael
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter You work in an international company. You need to take some time off work. Write a letter toyour employer. In your letter: -Explain why you need this time off-give details of when you want the time off-say who can do your work when you are away v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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