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A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter-recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before-say where you went and where you stayed-say what you can yo v.2

A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter-recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before-say where you went and where you stayed-say what you can yo v. 2
Hello David, I am writing to you with regards your last email about holiday destination. My last summer holiday I visited Taiwan. I spend there 2 weeks and that was good enough to enjoy the island and local culture. Firstly, I must to tell you that Taiwan is extremely hot island and you might be surprised but the weather is always very beautiful. Capitol of island is a place must to see there are many old buildings and Chinese temples which are stunning. The best place to stay in Taipei is a hotel or you can try to find a nice apartment via Airbnb. I would suggest you find apartment through Airbnb you can save a lot of money this way. There are many amazing restaurants with old traditional Taiwanese cuisine. The best food you can find on the night street food market, the best what I had there was sea food plater with BBQ sauce. Secondly, I think it is very important to visit royal national park of Taiwan it is 2 hours drive from capitol city. It is very common to see there elephants and many endemic birds. I hope my suggestion will help you with your travel. All the best. Tomasz Zawadzki
Hello David,

I am writing to you with regards your last email about holiday destination.

My last summer holiday I visited Taiwan. I spend there 2 weeks and that was
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to enjoy the island and local culture.

Firstly
, I
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you that Taiwan is
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hot island and you might
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but
the weather is always
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very
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beautiful
. Capitol of island is a place
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must to
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see
there are
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many
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old
buildings and Chinese temples which are stunning. The best place to stay in Taipei is a hotel or you can try to find a nice apartment via Airbnb. I would suggest you find apartment through Airbnb you can save
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a lot of
money this way. There are
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many
amazing restaurants with
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old
traditional Taiwanese cuisine. The best food you can find on the night street food market, the best what I had there was sea food
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plater
with BBQ sauce.

Secondly
, I
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think
it is
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very
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important
to visit royal national park of Taiwan it is 2 hours drive from capitol city. It is
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very
common to
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see
there elephants and
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many
endemic birds.

I hope my suggestion will
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help
you with your travel.

All the best.

Tomasz
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4Mistakes

IELTS letter A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter-recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before-say where you went and where you stayed-say what you can yo v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
204 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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