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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter-explain why want to take time off work-give details of the amount of time you need-suggest how you wor v.7

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter-explain why want to take time off work-give details of the amount of time you need-suggest how you wor v. 7

Dear Manager, I am writing in regards to request of my unpaid leave for next month. My brother is getting married soon and the celebration of marriage will be held on 1st of March 2016, which is next two weeks, at Malaysia. As a part of the family member, participation is required because it is really important to our family. Therefore, I will not be able to come to company as I have to have some gift preparation for my brother and his lovely future wife. I have done most of job tasks for next week before I left Australia. As Katie has the same position as I do in the company, therefore she will be the one who takes over my position while I am away. I will not be coming to company, from Monday 21st to Sunday 27th and will be back on 3rd of March which is Thursday. I would be grateful that if you could allow me this time. This are very important to my family and me. Thank you in advance. Your Sincerely, Edison

Dear Manager,

I am writing Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".in regard towith regard toregarding
in regards to
 request of my unpaid This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 for next
 month.

My brother is getting married This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 and the celebration of marriage will be held
 on 1st of March 2016, which is next
 two weeks, at Malaysia. As a part of the family member, participation is required
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it is really
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 to our family. Therefore
, I will not be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 as I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 gift preparation for my brother and his lovely future wife.

I have done Consider using "most job" or "most of the job".most jobmost of the job
most of job
 tasks for next
 week This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 Australia. As Katie has the same position as I do in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
, therefore
 she will be the one who takes over my position while I am away. I will not be coming to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
, from Monday 21st to Sunday 27th and will be back on 3rd of March which is Thursday.

I would be grateful that if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me this time. The verb 'are' is plural. Did you mean "these are", "This is" or "This was"?These areThis isThis was
This are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 to my family and me. Thank you in advance.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
Sincerely
,

Edison

7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS letter You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter-explain why want to take time off work-give details of the amount of time you need-suggest how you wor v. 7

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

178 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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