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You work for a company, you need to take some time off and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter•Explain why you want to take some time off work•Give details of the amount of time you need•Suggest how you v.2

You work for a company, you need to take some time off and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter•Explain why you want to take some time off work•Give details of the amount of time you need•Suggest how you v. 2
Dear Sir, I am writing to request you to approve my leave for a week as I am planning to go on a vacation. Let me explain in detail. To elucidate last year has been very busy for me as I have been involved in the design and implementation of some critical projects additionally I have also been constantly travelling to customer locations. These activities have not only taken a toll on my health but also made my mind dull therefore I plan to go a vacation along with my family to some exotic place. This will not only give me a much-desired break but will be a great opportunity to rejuvenate my mind. Although my earlier plan was to go on holiday for two weeks however the plan later on changed to a week. Hence I will be on leave from Friday till Thursday next week. Meanwhile, Ana will be taking over in my absence as I have briefed her about the projects which I was handling. In case anything urgent comes up I will be reachable on what’s app or Viber. I look forward to your approval Yours sincerely Said
Dear Sir,

I am writing to request you to approve my
leave
for a
week
as I am planning to go on a vacation.
Let
me
explain
in detail.

To elucidate last year has been
very
busy for me as I have
been involved
in the design and implementation of
some
critical projects
additionally
I have
also
been
constantly
travelling to customer locations. These activities have not
only
taken a toll on my health
but
also
made my mind dull
therefore
I plan to go a vacation along with my family to
some
exotic place. This will not
only
give me a much-desired break
but
will be a great opportunity to rejuvenate my mind.

Although my earlier plan was to go on holiday for two
weeks
however
the plan later on
changed
to a
week
.
Hence
I will be on
leave
from Friday till Thursday
next
week
. Meanwhile, Ana will be taking over in my absence as I have briefed her about the projects which I was handling. In case anything urgent
comes
up I will be reachable on what’s app or
Viber
.

I look forward to your approval

Yours
sincerely


Said
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS letter You work for a company, you need to take some time off and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter•Explain why you want to take some time off work•Give details of the amount of time you need•Suggest how you v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
191 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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