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You work for a company, you need to take some time off and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter•Explain why you want to take some time off work•Give details of the amount of time you need•Suggest how you v.2

You work for a company, you need to take some time off and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter•Explain why you want to take some time off work•Give details of the amount of time you need•Suggest how you v. 2

Dear Sir, I am writing to request you to approve my leave for a week as I am planning to go on a vacation. Let me explain in detail. To elucidate last year has been very busy for me as I have been involved in the design and implementation of some critical projects additionally I have also been constantly travelling to customer locations. These activities have not only taken a toll on my health but also made my mind dull therefore I plan to go a vacation along with my family to some exotic place. This will not only give me a much-desired break but will be a great opportunity to rejuvenate my mind. Although my earlier plan was to go on holiday for two weeks however the plan later on changed to a week. Hence I will be on leave from Friday till Thursday next week. Meanwhile, Ana will be taking over in my absence as I have briefed her about the projects which I was handling. In case anything urgent comes up I will be reachable on what’s app or Viber. I look forward to your approval Yours sincerely Said

Dear Sir,

I am writing to request you to approve my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 for a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
week
 as I am planning to go on a vacation. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 in detail.

To elucidate last year has been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 busy for me as I have been involved
 in the design and implementation of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 critical projects additionally
 I have also
 been constantly
 travelling to customer locations. These activities have not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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but
also
 made my mind dull therefore
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some
 exotic place. This will not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 give me a much-desired break This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 will be a great opportunity to rejuvenate my mind.

Although my earlier plan was to go on holiday for two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
weeks
however
 the plan later on This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 to a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
week
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Hence,
Hence
 I will be on This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 from Friday till Thursday next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
week
. Meanwhile, Ana will be taking over in my absence as I have briefed her about the projects which I was handling. In case anything urgent This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 up I will be reachable on what’s app or Possible spelling mistake found.FiberVibeViperTiberVibesViler
Viber
.

I look forward to your approval

Yours sincerely


Said

10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter You work for a company, you need to take some time off and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter•Explain why you want to take some time off work•Give details of the amount of time you need•Suggest how you v. 2

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

191 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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