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On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fotunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letterDescribe the item you lostExplain how you lost ittell the insuranc v.7

On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fotunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letterDescribe the item you lostExplain how you lost ittell the insuranc v. 7
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to being supported from your insurance for my lost. Unfortunately, In the last travel that I had to Canada, I have lost my cellphone which I recently had bought from apple store. it' s specifics which I can describe it for you are a grey apple X with 256 capacity. Since I was not accurate, I couldn' t obtain the exact place where I' ve lost my phone. But the last moment I certainly know I had carried it, was at the theater named Manged. According to the insurance chart which is published in your website, As my job includes many contacts per day. I prefer to receive whole price of it as fast as its possible till 4th July. I would gratefully thank the company for their assurance of travel' s lost. Your faithfully Poon
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter with regard to
being supported
from your insurance for my lost.

Unfortunately, In the last travel that I had to Canada, I have lost my cellphone which I recently had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
from
Did you mean the proper noun "Apple Store"?
apple store
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
it&
#039; s specifics which I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
describe
it for you are a
Possible spelling mistake. 'grey' is British English.
grey
apple X with 256 capacity.

Since I was not accurate, I
Possible spelling mistake found.
couldn&
#039; t obtain the exact place where
Possible spelling mistake found.
I&
#039; ve lost my phone.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
the last moment I
certainly
know I had carried it, was at the theater named Manged.

According to the insurance chart which
is published
in your website, As my job includes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
contacts per day. I prefer to receive whole price of it as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
as its possible till 4th July.

I would
gratefully
thank the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
for their assurance of
Possible spelling mistake found.
travel&
#039; s lost.

Your
faithfully


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Poon
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS letter On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fotunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letterDescribe the item you lostExplain how you lost ittell the insuranc v. 7

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  American English
8 paragraphs
146 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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