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Your work in a company and need to take a certain course. Write a letter to your manager and say Explain why you need this training course Where and when you will take it how will the company benifit from it v.2

Your work in a company and need to take a certain course. Write a letter to your manager and say Explain why you need this training course Where and when you will take it how will the company benifit from it v. 2
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to request you to provide training to our team members to handle it easily for the upcoming projects. To begin with, team members who are currently working in reporting side and as you know this project is going to complte on sep 20 th and upcoming projects are more and more on analytics side and team members who don' t aware of this technology. Also, I have discussed this course an outside and selected one quotation which one suitable for our budget. Main Focus Infotech company is providing analytics course which one near to our company that exactly 10 minutes we can reach the destination and opposite to the park hotel. I would like to inform you that we will get benafit to provide training to existing team members and no need to recruite new employees from analytics backround because they are very consliest resources in the current market. I am looking forward your reply. yours faithfully, john.
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to request you to provide training to our
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to handle it
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for the upcoming projects.

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is providing analytics course which one near to our
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company
that exactly 10 minutes we can reach the destination and opposite to the park hotel.

I would like to inform you that we will
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benafit
to provide training to existing
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team
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and no need to
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recruite
new employees from analytics
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backround
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consliest
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I am looking forward your reply.

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yours
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,

john.
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IELTS letter Your work in a company and need to take a certain course. Write a letter to your manager and say Explain why you need this training course Where and when you will take it how will the company benifit from it v. 2

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  American English
7 paragraphs
165 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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