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WRITINGTASK 1You should spend about 20 minutes on thisYou work for an interactional company, You have see an advertisement for a training course which will be usefulWrite a letter to your manager li yor Tetter•Describe the training course you want to do v.2

WRITINGTASK 1You should spend about 20 minutes on thisYou work for an interactional company, You have see an advertisement for a training course which will be usefulWrite a letter to your manager li yor Tetter•Describe the training course you want to do v. 2
Dear Mr John, I am writing to you with respect to a training course advertised recently which will enhance the result desired for the on-going research. The training is about Mathematica software. With respect to the present research output, Mathematica software is a tool that has been upgraded and however, it is very imperative that I attend the training for better comprehension and also to be well equipped. However, the mathematica software would enhance the company’s biomath result in understanding the analysis of the model been under studied. This would not only give analysis but also present a pictoral representation of interaction between the two species. Although, previous software been used gives 2D presentation, however Mathematica software obtains 4D representation with numerical evaluation as it’s uniqueness. I would be grateful if the company could help out with registration fee and flight fair. This would ease the responsibility as other things such as substience would be responsible for by me. I look forward to a favourable response. Yours faithfully Adeniji Adejimi
Dear Mr John,

I am writing to you with respect to a training course advertised recently which will enhance the result desired for the
Did you mean "ongoing"?
on-going
research. The training is about
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Mathematica
software.

With respect to the present research output,
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Mathematica
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
software
is a tool that has
been upgraded
and
however
, it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
imperative that I attend the training for better comprehension and
also
to be
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
well equipped
.

However
, the
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mathematica
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
software
would enhance the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
’s
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biomath
result in understanding the analysis of the model been under studied. This would not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
give analysis
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
present a
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pictoral
representation of interaction between the two species. Although, previous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
software
been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
gives 2D presentation,
however
Possible spelling mistake found.
Mathematica
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
software
obtains 4D representation with numerical evaluation as it’s uniqueness.

I would be grateful if the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
out with registration fee and flight
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fair
. This would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ease
the responsibility as other things such as
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substience
would be responsible for by me.

I look forward to a
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favourable
response.

Yours
faithfully


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Adeniji
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Adejimi
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Mistakes

IELTS letter WRITINGTASK 1You should spend about 20 minutes on thisYou work for an interactional company, You have see an advertisement for a training course which will be usefulWrite a letter to your manager li yor Tetter•Describe the training course you want to do v. 2

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  American English
8 paragraphs
169 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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