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You work for an international company You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job Write a letter to your manager In your letter Describe the training course you want to do Explain what the company could do to hel v.2

You work for an international company You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job Write a letter to your manager In your letter Describe the training course you want to do Explain what the company could do to hel v. 2
Dear Sir, I’m writing to inform you about an IT training course which is will be provided by a local university. This course is totally free, because university tutors want to help their students, but its open for all inhabitants of our city. This course includes a lot of different chapters of internet technology and it is very useful for beginners. This course will be held on Mondays and Fridays from 8 a. m. till 2 p. m. I want you to let me visit it, because it would be very profitable for our company. You just need to exempt me from my duties for that time. As I know, there is now one specialist in our company that can create and edit a new internet web-site. For these purposes our company compelled every time ask strange organizations. As a result, these organizations demand a good deal of payment for their services, as we don’t have another choice. Instead of this, we would be able to maintain our web-site by us. Thank you in advance for considering my proposition, I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Kind regards, Givi Login
Dear Sir,

I’m writing to inform you about an IT training
course
which
is will
be provided
by a local university. This
course
is
totally
free,
because
university tutors want to
help
their students,
but
its open for all inhabitants of our city. This
course
includes
a lot of
different
chapters of internet technology and it is
very
useful for beginners.

This
course
will
be held
on Mondays and Fridays from 8 a. m. till 2 p. m. I want you to
let
me visit it,
because
it would be
very
profitable for our
company
. You
just
need to exempt me from my duties for that time.

As I know, there is
now
one specialist in our
company
that can create and edit a new internet web-site. For these purposes our
company
compelled every time ask strange organizations.
As a result
, these organizations demand a
good
deal of payment for their services, as we don’t have another choice.
Instead
of this, we would be able to maintain our web-site by us.

Thank you in advance for considering my proposition, I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Kind regards,

Givi
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IELTS letter You work for an international company You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job Write a letter to your manager In your letter Describe the training course you want to do Explain what the company could do to hel v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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