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Your-have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You naive find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letterdescribe the situationexplain why you cannot continue at this timesay what action you v.2

Your-have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You naive find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letterdescribe the situationexplain why you cannot continue at this timesay what action you v. 2

I am writing to bring to your attention that I can not continue part-time course as German class which I have enrolled myself on 25th October 2017 last year. Unfortunately, I have aligned with one projects in my company. This project is very difficult to manage the timings in order to stakeholders are there in several countries. I need to work on a rotational basis and also 12 hours work per day until this project is going to complete this year end. I know, it will be very difficult for you to consider my request during this middle of the semester. I don' t expect you to pay my refund amount. I am thinking to continue this course probably to start in the next year. It will really help if accounting department can adjust my fees for the next semester. I am really looking for your attention soon and also please accept my situation. Yours faithfully, John

I am writing to bring to your attention that I can not continue part-time course as German This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 which I have enrolled myself on 25th October 2017 last year.

Unfortunately, I have aligned with one projects in my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. This project is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 difficult to manage the timings in order to stakeholders are there in several countries. I need to work on a rotational basis and also
 12 hours work per day until this project is going to complete this year This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
.

I know, it will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 difficult for you to consider my request during this middle of the semester. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
Possible spelling mistake found.donedonsDonsDonadonaDON
don&
#039; t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 you to pay my refund amount. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am thinking to continue this course probably
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 in the next
 year. It will really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 if accounting department can adjust my fees for the next
 semester.

I am really
 looking for your attention This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 and also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 accept my situation.

Yours faithfully
,

John

4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS letter Your-have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You naive find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letterdescribe the situationexplain why you cannot continue at this timesay what action you v. 2

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

156 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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