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Your-have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You naive find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letterdescribe the situationexplain why you cannot continue at this timesay what action you v.2

Your-have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You naive find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letterdescribe the situationexplain why you cannot continue at this timesay what action you v. 2
I am writing to bring to your attention that I can not continue part-time course as German class which I have enrolled myself on 25th October 2017 last year. Unfortunately, I have aligned with one projects in my company. This project is very difficult to manage the timings in order to stakeholders are there in several countries. I need to work on a rotational basis and also 12 hours work per day until this project is going to complete this year end. I know, it will be very difficult for you to consider my request during this middle of the semester. I don' t expect you to pay my refund amount. I am thinking to continue this course probably to start in the next year. It will really help if accounting department can adjust my fees for the next semester. I am really looking for your attention soon and also please accept my situation. Yours faithfully, John
I am writing to bring to your attention that I can not continue part-time course as German
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
which I have enrolled myself on 25th October 2017 last year.

Unfortunately, I have aligned with one projects in my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. This project is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
difficult to manage the timings in order to stakeholders are there in several countries. I need to work on a rotational basis and
also
12 hours work per day until this project is going to complete this year
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
.

I know, it will be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
difficult for you to consider my request during this middle of the semester.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
Possible spelling mistake found.
don&
#039; t
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
you to pay my refund amount.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am thinking to continue this course
probably
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
in the
next
year. It will
really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
if accounting department can adjust my fees for the
next
semester.

I am
really
looking for your attention
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
and
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
accept my situation.

Yours
faithfully
,

John
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS letter Your-have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You naive find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letterdescribe the situationexplain why you cannot continue at this timesay what action you v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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