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Write a letter to your friend about a book that you have read recently. Include the following in your letter: – Describe the book. – Why do you want him/her to read it? – Tell him/her how to get the book. v.2

Write a letter to your friend about a book that you have read recently. Include the following in your letter: – Describe the book. – Why do you want him/her to read it? – Tell him/her how to get the book. v. 2
Dear Hen, I hope you are doing well, I am writing this letter that recently I have read one book and I am suggesting you to read this book for your carrier growth. Couple of weeks before, I have been there in to National public Library which is near to my house and I have found one fabulous book name called " Advanced Analytics in Statistics" . Actually, I got this book because of my current projects and it is really very useful to read it. Whereas you can get the information related to overcome in analytics and how we can easily learn this subject. in addition to this, all the algorithms which are really easy to understand it. I heard that next two years pipeline in your future project is analytics and you team manager is planning to provide training as well. I therefore, request you to read this book and lean analytics to become an architect and if you want to buy this book then you can get it in amazon. com or If you want to take it for couple of weeks then you can get it in the library. Please confirm as soon as possible in order to hold this book in library because this is very rare collection book. ' I am looking forward your response. Yours affectionately, Sam.
Dear Hen,

I hope you are doing well, I am writing this letter that recently I have
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for your carrier growth.

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, I have been there in to National public Library which is near to my
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and I have found one fabulous
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book
name called
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; Advanced Analytics in
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Statistics&quot
;
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.
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because
of my
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projects and it is
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very
useful to
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it. Whereas you can
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get
the information related to overcome in analytics and how we can
easily
learn this subject.
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in
addition to this, all the algorithms which are
really
easy to understand it. I heard that
next
two years pipeline in your future project is analytics and you team manager is planning to provide training
as well
.

I
therefore
, request you to
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read
this
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book
and lean analytics to become an architect and if you want to
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buy
this
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book
then you can
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get
it
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com
or If you want to take it for
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couple of
weeks then you can
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it in the library.
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Please
confirm as
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soon
as possible in order to hold this
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in library
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because
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very
rare collection
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. '

I am looking forward your response.

Yours
affectionately
,

Sam.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend about a book that you have read recently. Include the following in your letter: – Describe the book. – Why do you want him/her to read it? – Tell him/her how to get the book. v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
224 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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