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Your Saturday hasn't Overseas shouldn't buy a University. you want some information for you to go to university right to a student officer in your letter. Add him / her about the accommodation. The transportation facilitiesThe class schedule v.2

Your Saturday hasn't Overseas shouldn't buy a University. you want some information for you to go to university right to a student officer in your letter. Add him / her about the accommodation. The transportation facilitiesThe class schedule v. 2
Dear Sir< br> < br> I recently take admission in your esteemed University for the MBA course which commencing this September. The purpose of mine to penning down epistol is to you to seek the information about living facility, transport and class schedules etcetera before coming to Australia. < br> < br> As I am the native dweller of India and before it, I could& nbsp; not come Australia due to this I will novice to the ambience of Australia. Hence, I would like to know about the accommodation facilities which are given by you to an& nbsp; overseas student whether the university offers halls of residence or students have to find flats themselves? Apart from this, if student is living in a flat of a nearby society& nbsp; then what transportation facilities available there. I have tried to find out on the Internet but all my efforts are gone to vain because I could not get the proper data from it. < br> < br> Moreover, & nbsp; I could also like to know about the class schedules properly that when the classes would ushered in so that I will come there before you embarked the session. < br> < br> I would be very grateful if you give the details of these things as early as possible so that in future I would not face the major hurdles during my study and able to combat with them to ward off myself from critical situations. < br> < br> I look forward to hearing from. < br> < br> Yours faithfully& nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; 8th febraury 2018< br> < br> & nbsp; Aman
Dear Sir< br>

< br>

I recently take admission in your esteemed University for the MBA course which commencing this September. The purpose of mine to penning down epistol is to you to seek the information about living facility, transport and
class
schedules etcetera
before
coming to Australia. < br>

< br>

As I am the native dweller of India and
before
it, I could& nbsp; not
come
Australia due to this I will novice to the ambience of Australia.
Hence
, I would like to know about the accommodation facilities which are
given
by you to an& nbsp; overseas student whether the university offers halls of residence or students
have to
find flats themselves? Apart from this, if student is living in a flat of a nearby society& nbsp; then what transportation facilities available there. I have tried to find out on the Internet
but
all my efforts
are gone
to vain
because
I could not
get
the proper data from it. < br>

< br>

Moreover
, & nbsp; I could
also
like to know about the
class
schedules
properly
that when the classes would ushered in
so
that I will
come
there
before
you embarked the session. < br>

< br>

I would be
very
grateful if you give the
details
of these things as early as possible
so
that in future I would not face the major hurdles during my study and able to combat with them to ward off myself from critical situations. < br>

< br>

I look forward to hearing from. < br>

< br>

Yours
faithfully
& nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; 8th febraury 2018< br>

< br>

& nbsp; Aman
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS letter Your Saturday hasn't Overseas shouldn't buy a University. you want some information for you to go to university right to a student officer in your letter. Add him / her about the accommodation. The transportation facilitiesThe class schedule v. 2

Letter
  American English
15 paragraphs
321 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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