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You have recently changed your job and started working for a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: Explain why you changed your previous jobDescribe your new jobTell him/her your other news. v. 6

Dear Sandra, I' m writing this letter to tell you some news which has happened in my life. First of all, remember that time you helped me to upgrade my resume? Well, I sent it to a company in downtown applying for a position. Last Monday, they informed me that I got the job. You know that I wasn' t being well-paid and it was hard for me to pay all my bills. My activities in the new job didn' t change at all, and I get home one hour earlier. Besides, not only my workmates are friendly and funny, but also is my boss. Finally, I need to tell you more some news. My sister is pregnant! My mom is so excited about her first grandchild. Actually, all the members of my family are anxious about the birth. I' m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes, Márcia.

IELTS letter You have recently changed your job and started working for a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: Explain why you changed your previous jobDescribe your new jobTell him/her your other news. v.6

Dear Sandra,

I&
#039; m writing this letter to
tell
you
some
news which has happened in my life.

First of all
, remember that time you
helped
me to upgrade my resume? Well, I
sent
it to a
company
in downtown applying for a position. Last Monday, they informed me that I
got
the job. You know that I
wasn&
#039; t being well-paid and it was
hard
for me to pay all my bills.

My activities in the new job
didn&
#039; t
change
at all, and I
get
home one hour earlier.
Besides
, not
only
my workmates are friendly and
funny
,
but
also
is my boss.

Finally
, I need to
tell
you more
some
news. My sister is pregnant! My mom is
so
excited about her
first
grandchild. Actually, all the members of my family are anxious about the birth.

I&
#039; m looking forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Best wishes,

Márcia
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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Letter
8 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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