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Write a letter to a friend telling him/her that you’re going back to your hometown and you want to give him/her some furniture. Please say – Why you thought about him/her – Describe the furniture – Suggest a way for him/her to get it v.2

Write a letter to a friend telling him/her that you’re going back to your hometown and you want to give him/her some furniture. Please say – Why you thought about him/her – Describe the furniture – Suggest a way for him/her to get it v. 2
Dear Ken, I hope you are doing good. I writing to you regarding that I am planning to relocate to my native place. Also, I am planning to provide my items of furniture to you. First up all, I am very pleased to inform you that I have got the Government job which one is near to my hometown. Hardly, It will take 6 kilometers from my native in order to this I am planning to relocate to next month. Also, I would like to share my furniture items with you. I know that you are going to marry soon and looking forward to setting up your house. Currently, I have TV Showcase set, One wooden bed, 4 chairs, single table and I have 1 sofa with me. I would like to share my thoughts that you can come to my house next Saturday morning. We can have a good lunch over here after that we can call for packagers and movers to take my all furniture items. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, John
Dear Ken,

I hope you are doing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
.
Did you mean "I'm writing", "I am writing", or "I was writing"?
I writing
to you regarding that I am planning to relocate to my native place.
Also
, I am planning to provide my items of furniture to you.

First
up all, I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
pleased
to inform you that I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Government
job which one is near to my hometown.
The adverb 'Hardly' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
Hardly
, It will take 6 kilometers from my native in order to this I am planning to relocate to
next
month.
Also
, I would like to share my furniture items with you. I know that you are going to marry
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
and looking forward to setting up your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.
Currently
, I have TV Showcase set, One wooden bed, 4 chairs, single table and I have 1 sofa with me.

I would like to share my thoughts that you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
next
Saturday morning. We can have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
lunch over here after that we can call for packagers and movers to take my all furniture items.

Looking forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

John
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend telling him/her that you’re going back to your hometown and you want to give him/her some furniture. Please say – Why you thought about him/her – Describe the furniture – Suggest a way for him/her to get it v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
177 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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