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You are working overseas in an international company. You traveled back to your home country without informing your office friends. Write a apology letter to these friends. Apologies to your friend. Explain the situationWhat you enjoyed most working with th v.2

You are working overseas in an international company. You traveled back to your home country without informing your office friends. Write a apology letter to these friends. Apologies to your friend. Explain the situationWhat you enjoyed most working with th v. 2
Dear Jeff, Hope you are doing well. I deeply regret that I had to rush back to my home without informing you on my last working day in Germany. Please accept my sorry for not intimating you on my travel, as it were not only planned at the peak moment but also you were on leave on that day. As my work visa got expired by last Saturday I need to travel back to India on the same day for its renewal. I was desperately wanted to reach you, but my itinerary was rescheduled earlier. Therefore, I had to catch the domestic flight as early as possible to reach the capital city for departure to my country. I messed with my packing and got over-charged at boarding point. Anyway, that last two years working with you people changed my mind-set about Germans, I enjoyed the stay at your country and companionship of you. I am so lucky to have you as my friend. I truly enjoyed the team work and meetings with the team which helped me to build my confidence and subject knowledge. As a token of love and care, I left a souvenir with Jacob for you, i think you will like it. Please be in touch. Hope to see you soon. Yours lovingly Harish
Dear Jeff,

Hope you are doing well. I
deeply
regret that I had to rush back to my home without informing you on my last working day in Germany.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
accept my sorry for not intimating you on my travel, as it were not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
planned at the peak moment
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
you were on
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
on that day.

As my work visa
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
expired by last Saturday I need to travel back to India on the same day for its renewal. I was
desperately
wanted to reach you,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
my itinerary
was rescheduled
earlier.
Therefore
, I had to catch the domestic flight as early as possible to reach the capital city for departure to my country. I messed with my packing and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
over-charged at boarding point.

Anyway, that last two years working with you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
my mind-set about Germans, I enjoyed the stay at your country and companionship of you. I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
lucky to have you as my friend. I
truly
enjoyed the team work and meetings with the team which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
me to build my confidence and subject knowledge. As a token of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
and care, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
a souvenir with Jacob for you,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
you will like it.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
be in touch. Hope to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
lovingly


Harish
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS letter You are working overseas in an international company. You traveled back to your home country without informing your office friends. Write a apology letter to these friends. Apologies to your friend. Explain the situationWhat you enjoyed most working with th v. 2

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  American English
7 paragraphs
216 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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