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A friend has written a letter to you informing about his or her plan to visit your country/city. Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write: what he or she can do in your country/cityadvise him about the place he could stay atsuggest him/her what to v.6

A friend has written a letter to you informing about his or her plan to visit your country/city. Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write: what he or she can do in your country/cityadvise him about the place he could stay atsuggest him/her what to v. 6
Dear Jane, Hope you are doing good. I received your letter this morning and I was thrilled after reading your postcard that you are travelling to my city. I am curious to know that is your trip associated with business or vacation. Alongside, let me know about your itinerary as well. Furthermore, it would be great if you could let me know for how many days are you planning to be in the city, so that I can schedule my office accordingly. I know you are always fascinated by the art work, coincidentally, in the city we have an upcoming exhibition on local art and craft, as well as regional cuisines. I am sure you will love it. Also, all thanks to the season, the local administrative bodies have opened, the garden of flowers for tourists. It is a beautiful escape to the nature, moreover, the flower beds are maintained artistically. The place is great for clicking fantastic photographs. Last but not the least, I suggest on the way to my residence, do halt at the Ancient 62 fine-dine restaurant. The place serves mouth-watering Thai food with authentic flavors, you will love the meal and the hospitality. Looking forward to see you. Your Friend, Alex
Dear Jane,

Hope you are doing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
. I received your letter this
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
morning and
I
was thrilled
after reading your postcard that you are travelling to my city.

I am curious to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
that is
your trip associated with business or vacation. Alongside,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
about your itinerary
as well
.
Furthermore
, it would be great if you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
for how
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
days are you planning to be in the city,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I can schedule my office
accordingly
.

I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
you are always fascinated by the art work,
coincidentally
, in the city we have an upcoming exhibition on local art and craft,
as well
as regional cuisines. I am sure you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
it.
Also
, all thanks to the season, the local administrative bodies have opened, the garden of flowers for tourists. It is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
escape to the nature,
moreover
, the flower beds
are maintained
artistically
. The place is great for clicking fantastic photographs.

Last
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
not the least, I suggest on the way to my residence, do halt at the Ancient 62 fine-dine restaurant. The place serves mouth-watering Thai food with authentic flavors, you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
the meal and the hospitality.

Looking forward to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you.

Your Friend,

Alex
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter A friend has written a letter to you informing about his or her plan to visit your country/city. Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write: what he or she can do in your country/cityadvise him about the place he could stay atsuggest him/her what to v. 6

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
204 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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