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A friend has written a letter to you informing about his or her plan to visit your country/city. Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write: what he or she can do in your country/cityadvise him about the place he could stay atsuggest him/her what to v.6

A friend has written a letter to you informing about his or her plan to visit your country/city. Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write: what he or she can do in your country/cityadvise him about the place he could stay atsuggest him/her what to v. 6

Dear Jane, Hope you are doing good. I received your letter this morning and I was thrilled after reading your postcard that you are travelling to my city. I am curious to know that is your trip associated with business or vacation. Alongside, let me know about your itinerary as well. Furthermore, it would be great if you could let me know for how many days are you planning to be in the city, so that I can schedule my office accordingly. I know you are always fascinated by the art work, coincidentally, in the city we have an upcoming exhibition on local art and craft, as well as regional cuisines. I am sure you will love it. Also, all thanks to the season, the local administrative bodies have opened, the garden of flowers for tourists. It is a beautiful escape to the nature, moreover, the flower beds are maintained artistically. The place is great for clicking fantastic photographs. Last but not the least, I suggest on the way to my residence, do halt at the Ancient 62 fine-dine restaurant. The place serves mouth-watering Thai food with authentic flavors, you will love the meal and the hospitality. Looking forward to see you. Your Friend, Alex

Dear Jane,

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good
. I received your letter this Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).morning, and
morning and
 I was thrilled
 after reading your postcard that you are travelling to my city.

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know
that is
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let
 me You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoticerecognizeappreciateperceiveexperiencesee
know
 about your itinerary as well
. Furthermore
, it would be great if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoticerecognizeappreciateperceiveexperiencesee
know
 for how This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 days are you planning to be in the city, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can schedule my office accordingly
.

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know
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, in the city we have an upcoming exhibition on local art and craft, as well
 as regional cuisines. I am sure you will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 it. Also
, all thanks to the season, the local administrative bodies have opened, the garden of flowers for tourists. It is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 escape to the nature, moreover
, the flower beds are maintained
artistically
. The place is great for clicking fantastic photographs.

Last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not the least, I suggest on the way to my residence, do halt at the Ancient 62 fine-dine restaurant. The place serves mouth-watering Thai food with authentic flavors, you will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 the meal and the hospitality.

Looking forward to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you.

Your Friend,

Alex

7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter A friend has written a letter to you informing about his or her plan to visit your country/city. Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write: what he or she can do in your country/cityadvise him about the place he could stay atsuggest him/her what to v. 6

Letter

American English

8 paragraphs

204 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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