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your recently did a short cookery course The cookery school asked for your feedback on this course write a letter to the course director at the cookery school in your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you have done sin v.2

your recently did a short cookery course The cookery school asked for your feedback on this course write a letter to the course director at the cookery school in your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you have done sin v. 2
Dear sir or madam, I am writing to reply to your letter which you asked Me to give my feedback about the cookery course. My name is John Peterson. I am one of your old student. I have acquired numerous things and skills from your college. This course thought several dishes such as Indian cuisine, Chinese cuisine, and so on. In addition, i have improved my communication skills. Staffs are so friendly and have kind in nature. I enjoyed a lot when i was studying. I have cooked enormous items since my course, initially, i started to cook at Indian cuisine and later i started to cook Chinese, Italian and Arabic cuisines. overall, I have cooked several dishes since my course. I am also planning to do another cooking-related course. So, I would appreciate if you could suggest me some courses. Moreover, I would know that prospects of course such as course fees details and accommodation options. Thanks for your time. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, John peterson.
Dear sir or madam,

I am writing to reply to your letter which you asked Me to give my feedback about the cookery course.

My name is John Peterson. I am one of your
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student. I have acquired numerous things and
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skills
from your college. This
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course
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thought
several dishes such as Indian
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cuisine
, Chinese
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cuisine
, and
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on.
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,
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have
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improved
my communication
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skills
. Staffs are
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so
friendly and have kind in nature. I enjoyed a lot when
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i
was studying.

I have cooked enormous items since my
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course
,
initially
,
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i
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started
to cook at Indian
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cuisine
and later
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i
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started
to cook Chinese, Italian and Arabic
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cuisines
.
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overall
, I have cooked several dishes since my course.

I am
also
planning to do another cooking-related
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course
.
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So
, I would appreciate if you could suggest me
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some
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courses
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, I would know that prospects of
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course
such as
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course
fees
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details
and accommodation options.

Thanks for your time. I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

John
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IELTS letter your recently did a short cookery course The cookery school asked for your feedback on this course write a letter to the course director at the cookery school in your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you have done sin v. 2

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  American English
8 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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