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you recently did a short course. the cooekery school has asked for your feedback on this course. write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter DESCRIBE WHAT you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you have done since v.4

you recently did a short course. the cooekery school has asked for your feedback on this course. write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter DESCRIBE WHAT you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you have done since v. 4
Dear sir or Madam, I am jasmine kaur. I am writing in response to give my feedback on the vocational kitchen course I had completed last week in your prestigious " unique cuisine' ' institution. At first, the course was a learning experience for me. The most intriguing part of the course was the people of diverse tradition people under same roof working as a teamwork unitedly. Besides, opportunity to acquire the understanding of exquisite meals and cuisine from different people according to their individual preferences. As well knowledge of myriad of herbs, shrubs and unique styles of preparing dishes. I loved the making of indian deserts the most in the course. Noticeably, i was not expertise in the cooking so I have invested my greatest time in learning the ways and techniques of cooking style with a little practice of cooking in every weekends. Whenever i tried to heat the pan and start to do something I just scattered everything all around. Luckily, in the last days of the course i have cooked a few times in a day. Lastly, i would like to suggest you to add some western dishes such as italian, spanish and other dishes methods of cooking in the course to have awareness of international cuisine also. |I hope you will considered about this in next session of the course. yours faithfully, jasmeen kaur
Dear sir or Madam,

I am jasmine
kaur
. I am writing in response to give my feedback on the vocational kitchen
course
I had completed last week in your prestigious
&quot
; unique
cuisine&
#039; ' institution.

At
first
, the
course
was a learning experience for me. The most intriguing part of the
course
was the
people
of diverse tradition
people
under same roof working as a teamwork
unitedly
.
Besides
, opportunity to acquire the understanding of exquisite meals and cuisine from
different
people
according to their individual preferences.
As well
knowledge of myriad of herbs, shrubs and unique styles of preparing dishes. I
loved
the making of
indian
deserts the most in the course.

Noticeably
,
i
was not expertise in the cooking
so
I have invested my greatest time in learning the ways and techniques of cooking style with a
little
practice of cooking in every weekends. Whenever
i
tried to heat the pan and
start
to do something I
just
scattered everything all around. Luckily, in the last days of the
course
i
have cooked a few times in a day.

Lastly
,
i
would like to suggest you to
add
some
western dishes such as
italian
,
spanish
and other dishes methods of cooking in the
course
to have awareness of international cuisine
also
.

|I hope you will
considered about this
in
next
session of the course.

yours
faithfully
,

jasmeen
kaur
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Mistakes
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IELTS letter you recently did a short course. the cooekery school has asked for your feedback on this course. write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter DESCRIBE WHAT you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you have done since v. 4

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
228 words
6.0
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