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You recently did a short course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letterDescribe what you enjoyed about the courseSay how much cooking you have done since th v. 3

Dear Sir or Madam, The impetus behind writing this letter is to appreciate the efforts you made at your school to teach students. Three months back, I had attended your cookery school to get some expertise in culinary art. Although the duration was only six weeks, I got the opportunity to learn how to cook international cuisines. Your teaching methodology is really commendable, particularly the fusion you do with various spices is exceptional. When I left the school, I took admission in Masters in restaurant management. Along with the study, I am also doing a part-time job at a local Chinese restaurant, where I work as an assistant to the chief. In the supervision of the chief, I cook many Chinese dishes, and I am gradually getting hands-on Chinese food. I would like to suggest that your school should also offer baking classes. During my summer vacation, I would like to join your institute to get to know how to cook different cakes, pizzas. I believe that there many things that I should learn about baking to get a job in any five-star hotel. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sara Khan

IELTS letter You recently did a short course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letterDescribe what you enjoyed about the courseSay how much cooking you have done since th v.3

Dear Sir or Madam, The impetus behind writing this letter is to appreciate the efforts you made at your
school
to teach students. Three months back, I had attended your cookery
school
to
get
some
expertise in culinary art. Although the duration was
only
six weeks, I
got
the opportunity to learn how to cook international cuisines. Your teaching methodology is
really
commendable,
particularly
the fusion you do with various spices is exceptional. When I
left
the
school
, I took admission in Masters in restaurant management. Along with the study, I am
also
doing a part-time job at a local Chinese restaurant, where I work as an assistant to the chief. In the supervision of the chief, I cook
many
Chinese dishes, and I am
gradually
getting hands-on Chinese food. I would like to suggest that your
school
should
also
offer baking classes. During my summer vacation, I would like to
join
your institute to
get
to know how to cook
different
cakes, pizzas. I believe that there
many
things that I should learn about baking to
get
a job in any five-star hotel. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours
faithfully
, Sara Khan
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
Letter
7 paragraphs
194 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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