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You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school asked for your feedback o this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the c v.4

You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school asked for your feedback o this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the c v. 4
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my happiness about learning to cook various cakes from your class that was held last week. I enrolled for cake making the course a week before and did some pre-learning before attending the class. Since I do not have basic knowledge of cooking in bakery items, I enjoyed the way you thought us from the basics and in a serene way. I not only liked the way you equipped us with the deep know-how but also the way you thought us about the specific ingredients that should be used while cooking different types of cakes. After doing a course at your class last week, I tried making a chocolate cake on my brother' s birthday that was a day before yesterday. Having tried it only once, it was reasonably good. Though it was not as attractive as I saw in your class, but was complemented by all my family members. I would like you to conduct a Chinese cooking class in the future. Since this cuisine is becoming more popular in our town, many people are interested in learning it. Moreover, as there are not many restaurants in our town who make authentic Chinese food, learning this will give many people an opportunity to serve as a Chinese cook in renowned restaurants. Hoping to learn many more authentic dishes at your class. Your' s faithfully John Patel.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my happiness about learning to cook various cakes from your
class
that
was held
last week.

I enrolled for cake making the course a week
before
and did
some
pre-learning
before
attending the
class
. Since I do not have basic knowledge of cooking in bakery items, I enjoyed the way you
thought
us from the basics and
in a serene way
. I not
only
liked the way you equipped us with the deep know-how
but
also
the way you
thought
us about the specific ingredients that should be
used
while cooking
different
types of cakes.

After doing a course at your
class
last week, I tried making a chocolate cake on my
brother&
#039; s birthday that was a day
before
yesterday. Having tried it
only
once, it was
reasonably
good
. Though it was not as attractive as I
saw
in your
class
,
but
was complemented
by all my family members.

I would like you to conduct a Chinese cooking
class
in the future. Since this cuisine is becoming more popular in our town,
many
people
are interested
in learning it.
Moreover
, as there are not
many
restaurants in our town who
make
authentic Chinese food, learning this will give
many
people
an opportunity to serve as a Chinese cook in renowned restaurants.

Hoping to learn
many
more authentic dishes at your
class
.

Your&
#039; s
faithfully


John Patel.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS letter You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school asked for your feedback o this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the c v. 4

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
234 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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