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Your neighbour keeps his pet in the garden, which has caused some troubles to your life. write a letter to your neighbour. In the letter write: . who your and why you write this letter. explain the problems. give your suggestions on how t v.2

Your neighbour keeps his pet in the garden, which has caused some troubles to your life. write a letter to your neighbour. In the letter write: . who your and why you write this letter. explain the problems. give your suggestions on how t v. 2
Dear Mr Smith I am living in a house just opposite to yours. I am writing this epistle to you as the society and me are facing some issues from your dog as you keep it in your park. As you are not tying your pet and it roams freely in your garden. So, when children go out to play, your dog barks at them and toddlers get afraid from Bruno and stopped going out in the street to play outdoor games hence it will effect their health. Not only this but also two days back, my son was coming from school in the afternoon and Bruno tried to bite my son but luckily my son was able to escape. That is why, it is not good to leave it freely. Moreover, yesterday, social club members visited your home to invite you on the function arranged in the society. But, your pet was roaming in the park, so they were not able to enter your house. I request you to keep your dog inside the house. But, if this is not possible then atleast, you shuld tie it in the garden rather than to set it free. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Flora Farnandes
Dear Mr Smith

I am living in a
house
just
opposite to yours. I am writing this epistle to you as the society and me are facing
some
issues from your dog as you
keep
it in your park.

As you are not tying your pet and it roams
freely
in your garden.
So
, when children go out to play, your dog barks at them and toddlers
get
afraid from
Bruno and
stopped
going out in the street to play outdoor games
hence
it will
effect
their health. Not
only
this
but
also
two days back, my son was coming from school in the afternoon and Bruno tried to bite my son
but
luckily my son was able to escape.
That is
why, it is not
good
to
leave
it
freely
.
Moreover
, yesterday, social club members visited your home to invite you on the function arranged in the society.
But
, your pet was roaming in the park,
so
they were not able to enter your
house
.

I request you to
keep
your dog inside the
house
.
But
, if this is not possible then
atleast
, you
shuld
tie it in the garden
rather
than to set it free.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
,

Flora
Farnandes
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS letter Your neighbour keeps his pet in the garden, which has caused some troubles to your life. write a letter to your neighbour. In the letter write: . who your and why you write this letter. explain the problems. give your suggestions on how t v. 2

Letter
7 paragraphs
207 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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