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You wish to enrol in a course at an Australian college. You have already written a letter to the college asking for information but you have not received the reply yet. Write a letter to the college explaining your concern because the course will start in v.2

You wish to enrol in a course at an Australian college. You have already written a letter to the college asking for information but you have not received the reply yet. Write a letter to the college explaining your concern because the course will start in v. 2
Dear Sir I am writing this letter to seek the details about the enrolment procedure of the course named Applied Data Science for Python provided by your college. Last month, I had sent a missive to your department to gather the information regarding the admission process of the above mentioned course but I did not get any response. As the programme is starting within two months and it is being too late that I have not yet enrolled. The reason for being late is that I did not get answer for my queries from you. That is why, I am again writing this epistle. I want to know whether the seats are available so that I can fill the admission form for being a part of this course. If, it is possible that still I have time to participate in the course then could you please provide me further information. I would like to know for how long this course would continue? And what would be the cost to complete this programme? Whether, I will get accommodation in the college hostel as I am new to Sydney and unaware of the surrounding. I would be pleased if you respond back to me as soon as possible as you know, I do not have enough time. Yours sincerely Malisa Thompson
Dear Sir

I am writing this letter to seek the
details
about the
enrolment
procedure of the
course
named Applied Data Science for Python provided by your college. Last month, I had
sent
a missive to your department to gather the information regarding the admission process of the above mentioned
course
but
I did not
get
any response.

As the
programme
is starting within two months and it is being too late that I have not
yet
enrolled. The reason for being late is that I did not
get
answer for my queries from you.
That is
why, I am again writing this epistle. I want to know whether the seats are available
so
that I can fill the admission form for being a part of this course.

If, it is possible that
still
I have time to participate in the
course
then could you
please
provide me
further
information. I would like to know for how long this
course
would continue? And what would be the cost to complete this
programme
? Whether, I will
get
accommodation in the college hostel as I am new to Sydney and unaware of the surrounding.

I would be
pleased
if you respond back to me as
soon
as possible as you know, I do not have
enough
time.

Yours
sincerely


Malisa
Thompson
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS letter You wish to enrol in a course at an Australian college. You have already written a letter to the college asking for information but you have not received the reply yet. Write a letter to the college explaining your concern because the course will start in v. 2

Letter
7 paragraphs
218 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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