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Your neighbour has been making a lot of noise recently. This has been causing you problems, and you want to ask them to stop. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter: -ask for an explanation for the noise-explain the problems this has caused for yo v.2

Your neighbour has been making a lot of noise recently. This has been causing you problems, and you want to ask them to stop. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter: -ask for an explanation for the noise-explain the problems this has caused for yo v. 2
Dear neighbor, I am writing to complain about the noise levels coming from your apartment in recent weeks. Could you explain what is happening that is producing so much noise? I am really mystified as to what you could be doing. I can hardly have a conversation with someone sitting next to me, because it is so loud. This situation is having a negative effect on my entire family. I have been unable to sleep properly, because of the noise levels even late at night. My son complains that he cannot focus on his homework, while even our don has been behaving oddly; she lost her appetite, and has no energy. While I do not understand why this has become such a problem. I must ask you to reduce the amount of noise you make, and try to keep quiet during the evening when we are at home so that my son can do his schoolwork undisturbed. If this situation continues, I will have no choice but to make a noise complaint to the police and/or to the city council. I trust you will make the necessary changes and that this will be the end of the matter. Regards, MJ
Dear neighbor,

I am writing to complain about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
levels coming from your apartment in recent weeks.

Could you
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explain
what is happening
that is
producing
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so
much
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
? I am
really
mystified as to what you could be doing. I can hardly have a conversation with someone sitting
next
to me,
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because
it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
loud.

This situation is having a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
effect on my entire family. I have been unable to sleep
properly
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
levels even late at night. My son complains that he cannot focus on his homework, while even our don has been behaving
oddly
; she lost her appetite, and has no energy.

While I do not understand why this has become such a problem. I
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must
ask you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
you
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make
, and try to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
quiet during the evening when we are at home
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that my son can do his schoolwork undisturbed. If this situation continues, I will have no choice
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but
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
complaint to the police and/or to the city council.

I trust you will
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make
the necessary
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
and that this will be the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of the matter.

Regards,

MJ
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS letter Your neighbour has been making a lot of noise recently. This has been causing you problems, and you want to ask them to stop. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter: -ask for an explanation for the noise-explain the problems this has caused for yo v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
199 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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