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You have recently moved into a new home. You are planning for a party. However, you are worried about the invoice which may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter. -Introduce yourself-invite your neighbour-describe the plan v. 2

Dear Phutela I am neighbour of your home. I am writing this letter to invite you to party for shifting into a new home. I recently moved from my old house to new home in aurora society it is situated in Chandigarh it is very big society basically I am working in HDFC bank in last five years. While t you happiness of new house. I will arrange party for my relative and my friends and his party will celebrating on answer Cytie and 18 feb at night. And I would be grateful if you come to this party. As a neighbour, invited you, because because neighbour is much important, they stand with person in any joy and sorrows. This party is huge party, there are lots of cuisines for eating, specially, I arrange the big music system for dancing. I told you, if you have any problem from music, please tell to me as soon as possible. So I could solve this problem. Your sincerely Aman

IELTS letter You have recently moved into a new home. You are planning for a party. However, you are worried about the invoice which may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter. -Introduce yourself-invite your neighbour-describe the plan v.2

Dear
Phutela
I am
neighbour
of your home. I am writing this letter to invite you to party for shifting into a new home.
I
recently
moved
from my
old
house
to new home in aurora society it
is situated
in Chandigarh it is
very
big
society
basically
I am working in HDFC bank in last five years.
While
t
you happiness
of new
house
. I will arrange party for my relative and my friends and his party will
celebrating
on answer
Cytie
and 18
feb
at night. And I would be grateful if you
come
to this party. As a
neighbour
, invited you,
because
because
neighbour
is much
important
, they stand with person in any joy and sorrows. This party is huge party, there are lots of cuisines for eating,
specially
, I arrange the
big
music system for dancing. I
told
you, if you have any problem from music,
please
tell
to me
as
soon
as possible.
So
I could solve this problem. Your
sincerely
Aman
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes
6 paragraphs
166 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Band score ≥ 7
  • Band score ≤ 6
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