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You have recently moved into a new home. You are planning for a party. However, you are worried about the invoice which may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter. -Introduce yourself-invite your neighbour-describe the plan v.2

You have recently moved into a new home. You are planning for a party. However, you are worried about the invoice which may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter. -Introduce yourself-invite your neighbour-describe the plan v. 2
Dear Phutela I am neighbour of your home. I am writing this letter to invite you to party for shifting into a new home. I recently moved from my old house to new home in aurora society it is situated in Chandigarh it is very big society basically I am working in HDFC bank in last five years. While t you happiness of new house. I will arrange party for my relative and my friends and his party will celebrating on answer Cytie and 18 feb at night. And I would be grateful if you come to this party. As a neighbour, invited you, because because neighbour is much important, they stand with person in any joy and sorrows. This party is huge party, there are lots of cuisines for eating, specially, I arrange the big music system for dancing. I told you, if you have any problem from music, please tell to me as soon as possible. So I could solve this problem. Your sincerely Aman
Dear
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Phutela


I am
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neighbour
of your home. I am writing this letter to invite you to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
for shifting into a new home.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
recently
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moved
from my
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old
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
to new home in aurora society it
is situated
in Chandigarh it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
society
basically
I am working in HDFC bank in last five years.
“While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
t
Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'you'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
you happiness
of new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. I will arrange
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
for my relative and my friends and his
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "celebrate"
celebrating
on answer
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Cytie
and 18
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feb
at night. And I would be grateful if you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to this party.

As a
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neighbour
, invited you,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
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neighbour
is much
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
, they stand with person in any joy and sorrows. This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
is huge
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
, there are lots of cuisines for eating,
specially
, I arrange the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
music system for dancing. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
you, if you have any problem from music,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
The verb 'to tell someone' does not require a preposition.
to me
as
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soon
as possible.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
I could solve this problem.

Your
sincerely


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Aman
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes

IELTS letter You have recently moved into a new home. You are planning for a party. However, you are worried about the invoice which may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter. -Introduce yourself-invite your neighbour-describe the plan v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
166 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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