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While parking his car in the lane outside your home, a neighbour has caused some damage to your car. You have decided to write to this neighbour. Write a letter to him/her. In the letter: – say why you are writing– describe the damage caused to your car v.2

While parking his car in the lane outside your home, a neighbour has caused some damage to your car. You have decided to write to this neighbour. Write a letter to him/her. In the letter: – say why you are writing– describe the damage caused to your car v. 2
Dear Mr. John, I have noticed in the evening that there are few damages on my car, that is parked just outside my main gate. On checking CCTV footage, I have come know that your wife hit my car, while parking your car. That’s why I am writing to you to bring to your notice about the incident, and I hope till now you are informed! Side mirror of the right side is fully damaged, while there are long scratches from front door till the back door. After consulting with workshop, they informed that everything would be covered in insurance. However, a processing fee of Rs. 1000 is to be paid against the insurance claim. Initially, I was upset and angry as well after look at my car. But, form the CCTV footage, it was cleared that your wife was a beginner, and she was very much scared. Tell you wife that she no need to get upset, as I understand her situation. However, I would be glad if you pay the processing fee. You can transfer the amount via “Google Pay”, which may give you cashback. Yours sincerely, Bibhu Kalita
Dear Mr. John,

I have noticed in the evening that there are few damages on my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
, that
is parked
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
outside my main gate. On checking CCTV footage, I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
know that your wife hit my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
, while parking your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
. That’s why I am writing to you to bring to your notice about the incident, and I hope till
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
you
are informed
!

Side mirror of the right side is
fully
damaged, while there are long scratches from front door till the back door. After consulting with workshop, they informed that everything would
be covered
in insurance.
However
, a processing fee of Rs. 1000 is to
be paid
against the insurance claim.

Initially
, I
was upset
and angry
as well
after look at my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, form the CCTV footage, it
was cleared
that your wife was a beginner, and she was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
much scared.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Tell
you wife that she no need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
upset, as I understand her situation.
However
, I would be glad if you pay the processing fee. You can transfer the amount via “Google Pay”, which may give you cashback.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Bibhu
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Kalita
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS letter While parking his car in the lane outside your home, a neighbour has caused some damage to your car. You have decided to write to this neighbour. Write a letter to him/her. In the letter: – say why you are writing– describe the damage caused to your car v. 2

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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