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You are going to another country to study. you will like to do a part-time job. While you are studying, so you want to ask a friend lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. İn your letter, -give details of your study plans. - explain why v.7

You are going to another country to study. you will like to do a part-time job. While you are studying, so you want to ask a friend lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. İn your letter, -give details of your study plans. - explain why v. 7

Dear Kevin I hope that you are very good and this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to inform you regarding my school program that I will attend and to get handful of advice from you. As I have mentioned before that at last, I have been accepted by Greenwich University as graduate student. You can imagine that how I am happy when I hear that. Since the program will be continue for four year, it would be perfect idea that working in some part-time jobs in order to cover tuition fees, cost of living and accommodation prices. I do not experience regarding finding jobs or interview with employers therefore you could check on some jobs advertisement around your zone where you live for me? As you know I worked as a waiter barman and ball boy in high school years that why I can do it whatever you find related to job. Thank you for your help and I know that I owe something in the near future. All the best

Dear Kevin

I hope that you are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 and this letter finds you well.

I am writing this letter to inform you regarding my school program that I will attend and to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 handful of advice from you.

As I have mentioned This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 that at last, I have been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
 by Greenwich University as graduate student. You can imagine that how I am happy when I hear that. Since the program will be Consider using the past participle "continued"?continued
continue
 for four year, it would be perfect This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 that working in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 part-time jobs in order to cover tuition fees, cost of living and accommodation prices. I do not experience regarding finding jobs or interview with employers therefore
 you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 on This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "jobs'" or "job's"?jobs'job's
jobs
 advertisement around your zone where you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 for me? As you know I worked as a waiter barman and ball boy in high school years that why I can do it whatever you find related to job.

Thank you for your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 and I know that I owe something in the near future.

All the best

2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS letter You are going to another country to study. you will like to do a part-time job. While you are studying, so you want to ask a friend lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. İn your letter, -give details of your study plans. - explain why v. 7

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

174 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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