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Your neighbour has recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter •Explain the reason for the noise •Apologise •Describe what action you will take Write at least 150 wordsYou v.2

Your neighbour has recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter •Explain the reason for the noise •Apologise •Describe what action you will take You v. 2
I am writing this letter in response to your complaint regarding the loud noise from my flat because of which you had to suffer. I apologise for the trouble caused and assure you that this will not happen again. Last Sunday, I was trying to repair a broken window in my kitchen. Some children were playing cricket outside my house, by mistake, their cricket ball hit my kitchen window which broke its glass. Since, I do not have any prior experience the hammering and banging must have created a problem for you and your family. I am extremely sorry for the inconvenience caused because of the lack of my knowledge. I was not aware that the noise will be so loud that it will reach to your flat. As the work of the kitchen window is still not completed, I have decided to hire a professional. I will instruct him to keep the noise as low as possible. The work will be completed in a day or two. Once again, I apologise for the problems faced by you. Please accept the box of chocolates as a token of my deepest regret for the disturbance faced by you due to my negligence. Yours sincerely Prabhpreet Kaur
I am writing this letter in response to your complaint regarding the loud noise from my flat
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because
of which you had to suffer. I
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apologise
for the trouble caused and assure you that this will not happen again.

Last Sunday, I was trying to repair a broken window in my kitchen.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
children were playing cricket outside my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
, by mistake, their cricket ball hit my kitchen window which broke its glass. Since, I do not have any prior experience the hammering and banging
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
have created a problem for you and your family.

I am
extremely
sorry for the inconvenience caused
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the lack of my knowledge. I was not aware that the noise will be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
loud that it will reach to your flat.

As the work of the kitchen window is
still
not completed, I have decided to hire a professional. I will instruct him to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
the noise as low as possible. The work will
be completed
in a day or two.

Once again, I
Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.
apologise
for the problems faced by you.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
accept the box of chocolates as a token of my deepest regret for the disturbance faced by you due to my negligence.

Yours
sincerely


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Prabhpreet
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Kaur
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS letter Your neighbour has recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter •Explain the reason for the noise •Apologise •Describe what action you will take You v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
204 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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