You have just started a new course at college and your tutor has asked you to write him a letter telling him something about yourself. v.2
You have just started a new course at college and your tutor has asked you to write him a letter telling him something about yourself. v. 2
Dear Sir,
I am a graduate student from Roman University in India. I have studied in India for 15 years. In my graduation computers, mathematics and physics are my major subjects, so I have chosen ‘Computer Technological Engineering’ course at your college currently.
As, I am an ardent follower of latest technology; I wish to take up this course in your institute in Canada. I always been keen to study abroad; moreover, enthusiastic to become a software developer. I was inspired by one of the top MNC’s CEO Mr. Ranjith Paul and admire him for his humongous fame.
I am passionate about long journey and inculcating in adventurous trips with my friends. To my interest I have taken up wild photography as my hobby and feel more relaxed while doing this. This makes me rejoice whole day and help me in achieving good score in my exams.
I hope I would be able to continue my passion of photography and continue my studies in engineering and achieve my career goal.
Thanking you sir,
Yours Sincerely,
John.
Dear Sir,
I am a graduate student from Roman University in India. I have studied in India for 15 years. In my graduation computers, mathematics and physics are my major subjects,
so
I have chosen ‘Computer Technological Engineering’ course at your college
currently
.
As, I am an ardent follower of
latest
technology; I wish to take up this course in your institute in Canada. I
always been
keen to study abroad;
moreover
, enthusiastic to become a software developer. I
was inspired
by one of the top
MNC
’s CEO Mr.
Ranjith
Paul and admire him for his humongous fame.
I
am passionate about long journey and inculcating in adventurous trips with my friends. To my interest I have taken up wild photography as my hobby and feel more relaxed while doing this. This
makes
me rejoice whole day and
help
me in achieving
good
score in my exams.
I hope I would be able to continue my passion of photography and continue my studies in engineering and achieve my career goal.
Thanking you sir,
Yours
Sincerely
,
John.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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