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Your Manager has asked you to do a presentation at the upcoming training session. Write a letter to your manager and say– What is the topic of presentation? – What is the benefit of conducting a session on that topic? – What are your requirements for v.2

Your Manager has asked you to do a presentation at the upcoming training session. Write a letter to your manager and say– What is the topic of presentation? – What is the benefit of conducting a session on that topic? – What are your requirements for v. 2
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you about my upcoming presentation topic. My topic is How to communicate with your customers. Let me explain why I have chosen this. It will be every useful for all our staff. First of all, a perfect way to connect with customer always for fronts your company and can thrive your sales. Moreover, effective communication always evolves reputation and increase believes in your product. Here, I have also a suggestion that you must send a notice to all the staff that, they would have join this presentation without any excuse. I would be grateful if you arrange a spacious hall with projector and sound vocal instrument like mike. One more thing, I need during the session, please serve some refreshment for all the staff like coffee, tea and snacks. I look forward to receiving your response. Thank you, Yours sincerely, Rajni
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to inform you about my upcoming presentation topic. My topic is How to communicate with your customers.
Let
me
explain
why I have chosen this. It will be every useful for all our staff.
First of all
, a perfect way to connect with customer always for fronts your
company
and can thrive your sales.
Moreover
, effective communication always evolves reputation and increase believes in your product.

Here, I have
also
a suggestion that you
must
send
a notice to all the staff that, they would have
join
this presentation without any excuse. I would be grateful if you arrange a spacious hall with projector and sound vocal instrument like mike. One more thing, I need during the session,
please
serve
some
refreshment for all the staff like coffee, tea and snacks.

I look forward to receiving your response.

Thank you,

Yours
sincerely
,

Rajni
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS letter Your Manager has asked you to do a presentation at the upcoming training session. Write a letter to your manager and say– What is the topic of presentation? – What is the benefit of conducting a session on that topic? – What are your requirements for v. 2

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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