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You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping center near your home. Write a letter to the council: -How you heard about the plan? -Explain how you feel about it? -Ask for more information about it? v.2

You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping center near your home. Write a letter to the council: -How you heard about the plan? -Explain how you feel about it? -Ask for more information about it? v. 2
Dear Sir, I am a resident of Valencia apartments situated at the Western Expressway and I am writing to enquire about the upcoming shopping center project. I came across the development plan while listening to the local radio station, as well as, I read about the same in the recent weekly periodical of Estate News. I am pleased that the local authorities have approved and welcomed the idea of a shopping complex in the vicinity. This would mean, the localities will no longer have to drive miles towards the downtown every weekend fetching groceries and mandatory supplies. As a curious inhabitant, I would like to know that by when we are expecting the commencement of the commercial complex. Additionally, will the shopping space be confined to brands of apparels or electronic gadgets or will the mall have hyper city or supermarket catering to daily needs. Last but not the least, during the construction phase will there be any road closures or route diversions. Looking forward for your response. Your’s faithfully Alex Jhonson
Dear Sir,

I am a resident of Valencia apartments situated at the Western
Expressway and
I am writing to
enquire
about the upcoming shopping center project.

I came across the development plan while listening to the local radio station,
as well
as, I read about the same in the recent weekly periodical of Estate News.

I
am
pleased
that the local authorities have approved and welcomed the
idea
of a shopping complex in the vicinity. This would mean, the localities will no longer
have to
drive miles towards the downtown every weekend fetching groceries and mandatory supplies.

As a curious inhabitant, I would like to know that by when we are expecting the commencement of the commercial complex.
Additionally
, will the shopping space
be confined
to brands of apparels or electronic gadgets or will the mall have hyper city or supermarket catering to daily needs. Last
but
not the least, during the construction phase will there be any road closures or route diversions.

Looking forward for your response.

Your’s
faithfully


Alex
Jhonson
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS letter You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping center near your home. Write a letter to the council: -How you heard about the plan? -Explain how you feel about it? -Ask for more information about it? v. 2

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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